|Reviews for Birds Bite|
| The Phoenix Panther 66 chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
are you going to continue?
| Sunshinegirl22 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
It's a good start please update soon
| sass box chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I really like this so far and think you've got a great idea with plenty of potential. However, there are a few things that can be off-putting to potential reader/reviewers. The story is a wall of text split into two paragraphs, which is hard to read. I had to struggle a little to get through the first few sentences.
When somebody new talks, there should be a new paragraph, and when you introduce a new thought or idea. This would make everything a lot easier to read.
However, I really like where this is going, and you're a good writer. I want to know what's wrong with Bird soon!
| elightate chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Yay! Bird stories love it!
Please update soon
| obsessed by tv chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
well done good update soon cant wait to see where you going with this
| SpinningTop-01 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Love this story & where it is heading!
Please update soon, would like to find out what happens!