|Reviews for Who Are We, We Are Rudies|
| Aizen's Bitch Curl chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Scratch that last review. This way this story started out was terrible. Rewrite it. NOW.
The fact that Yoyo is in this story has pissed me off.
Your Grammar sucks.
Your spelling sucks.
Your punctuation sucks.
If you need a beta, good lord I will help you. This is the FIRST mean reveiw I have EVER posted and I never thought I would ever post one.
Delete this story.
Go to Microsoft Word. Slowly and carefully plan out your words and plot and when that red scriggly line comes up on one of your words. SPELL IT CORRECTLY! When that green scriggly line comes up. CORRECT YOUR GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION!
Now snap to it, young'un.
I would really like to see this story go somewhere.
| Epsilon the Blue Ace chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I know this is a late review, but I actually like how you started this story out.
I Hope you continue it.