|Reviews for Faery Heroes|
| LoverIndia chapter 41 . 3/12
Absolutely loved it. update soon
| ThePink1 at Reefside.Net chapter 41 . 3/11
Wow, a genuine look at the problem that is 'poor Ginny' in so many fics. Great chapter to accentuate an already great story, Silent. Catch ya on the flipside, A J.
| Anonymous chapter 41 . 3/11
I think the problem you have in writing Ginny is that you want her character to be simple and straightforward. Making her delusional seems excessive to me. Instead, she's a very driven girl who very much wants her shining hero, but as she sits him up on this pedestal, everyone else she interacts with wants to, and tries to, tear him down. She also doesn't seem terribly sociable, considering that she barely has personal friends mentioned, and maintains this hero-worshipping crush despite 2 years of pristine neglect.
I'd suspect you were leading this to either her being dosed with various love potions (how else could Molly get Harry, but by living through her own daughter?) or having her memories tampered with in more direct ways. This seems especially notable because her father isn't being dosed, and the main suspect for such dosages is currently hospitalized and without a potions workshop.
Since the conflict and turmoil and suspense of this story isn't coming from the main characters (as they have happy interactions and are notably more powerful than those they have encountered thus far), the humor seems to be coming mostly from the central trio's merry romps into lawlessness, and the conflict and growth seem to come from how their interactions affect the side characters. I especially like what is going on with Neville, and would appreciate more scenes involving Astoria and possibly Colin Creevey. Neville in particular is providing a very interesting mix of pathos and social conflict. His perspective really makes this story interesting, and I think it would be nice to get a light salting of characters going through their own challenges, even if they don't rise to the occasion with as much grace, or success.
| FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 41 . 3/11
Nice cliffhanger at the end. You left me wondering who, with no apparent clues. Ginny needs to be In St. Mungo's. Ron needs to grow up. Harry needs to lean on his love for Hermione and Luna, lest the darkness consume him. Of the three he is the only one doing what he needs to do to hang on to his mental health, and humanity.
| fofofofo chapter 41 . 3/10
If you take away everything but Neville, it still would be a great chapter. Well done.
| mageofmyth chapter 41 . 3/10
Yea Neville. Now he just needs to go buy a wand that fits him.
Since Ginny owes Harry a life-dept isn't their something that he could do with that to stop her? Perhaps a magical contract. If not then he should engineer an accident that erases her entire mind, let her start back over.
I was glad that they were proactive about the Azkaban death-eaters.
| Kaemon Manzo chapter 41 . 3/10
Amazing story so far, I really like the way you have been doing the character bashing without I believe going overboard.
| Power Taco chapter 41 . 3/9
So a question about Ginny. After everything is over why not have Harry use lifedebt to have her go to "mind healer" for several months, and then rewrite her personality like they though of doing to Umbridge so she can live a normal, and productive life? With the life debt use they would have plenty of time to rewrite her into someone that can live a normal productive life that is not obsessed with the BWL. or I suppose you can go the super Greek route, and make her swear off men, turn into a raging lesbian, and then be killed by a group of horny men...Greek tragedies are totally hilarious.
| DaughterofDeath chapter 41 . 3/9
please update soon
| arapto chapter 41 . 3/9
The impression I got from your writing was that someone implanted fake memories to make Ginny obsessed with Harry. One obvious candidate is Dumbledore but I like Voldemort for the part, an unintended consequence of meddling with Ginny's mind while she had the diary. After all, the more obsessed the more of her soul she would pour into it.
| General Mac chapter 41 . 3/8
oohhh wonder who the company is? thanks love it more pretty please
| Tornhold chapter 41 . 3/7
Never a dull moment... that's a lie, but not a big one. Loading is always dull.
*silently watches for updates.*
| Bobboky chapter 41 . 3/7
| codyw1 chapter 41 . 3/7
Good chapter. ;)
| Endgames chapter 41 . 3/7
When your note at the top said there were only a few chapters left in this story I actually pouted. I've been enjoying this way too much. Each chapter is well-written and funny, and you update regularly so I tend to check every day. Still, it is good to go out on a high note and not drag the story out unnecessarily. Besides, there's still Black Princess Ascendant that I can satisfy myself with.
Even if ineffective, it is good to see a bit more security around the prison than the Department of Mysteries. It would have been annoying for there to have been no human guards in evidence.