|Reviews for Faery Heroes|
| S0310 chapter 50 . 6/11
| Guest chapter 50 . 6/5
Great story. I am anti Ron. And although I'm not into the threesome story you made it work out well. I like the dark harry. Great writing
| The Woolly Llama chapter 36 . 6/1
I know it has likely already been said, making this redundant especially considering you finished the story, but wasn't the giant chess set McGonagall and the flying keys Flitwick, when Ron is stewing about HHr being together and saying that Harry would be dead without him? Also another 'nitpick' that is redundant, wouldn't it be Magizoo-ology rather than Magizoology when Luna mentions Animal Planet.
Anyway love the story, on my third read through.
| boricuagizmo1 chapter 50 . 6/1
GREAT STORY finished in two days.
| Guest chapter 35 . 5/22
Regarding the author's notes at the end, I don't think Myrtle's death was used for a Horcrux. He had the ring, but the Riddle murders were used for the diary, not the ring. It was later, after Morfin's death that he made the ring and hid it in the Gaunt shack
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/21
Oohh! Better idea! They should switch food with Ron and Ginny! Make them get caught in the act of making babies while under the influence of the love potions brewed by their mother!
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/21
If like to see Harry prove there are love potions in his food with the entire Order sitting around the table, then apologize to Arthur saying this is the only way he can see to both safeguard himself against future attempts, and not destroy the Weaslys by pressing charges, then call in Ginny's Life Debt and take her as a slave.
That or call it in while pretending to be under the influence of the love potions.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/21
I love the idea of going Robin Hood on the Purebloods. I would like to point out one thing: the room of hidden things, where they're about to go get the diadem. It's described as having piles of valuable things like gems, goblin made weapons, mint condition old brooms for collectors. They should clean it out.
| AlaskanKing chapter 31 . 5/15
Just a little timeline since you seem to think that Slughorn is the reason Riddle knew about the Horcruxes. By the time, Tom asks Horace at the beginning of his 5th year, he has already killed his father and framed his Uncle for them. According to The Harry Potter Lexicon timeline, he did it about a month before. Remember he is WEARING Marvolo's ring when he talks to Horace, it had already been turned into his first Horcrux. This is a common mistake about Fanon authors that think the Diary was his first. The Basilisk and framing Hagrid happened in his sixth year. By the time Tom talks to Slughorn, he is well aware of how to make a Horcrux and just wanted a second opinion on if he could make multiples. I also think he was so arrogant that he needed to show off his horcrux to someone without them knowing what it was.
Is Horace a little despicable? Probably. And he should have told Dumbles about them long before, but he isn't evil.
| KieranK chapter 25 . 5/14
When Luna said "the big one or the important one." I wasn't actually sure which was which.
Still not too sure in all honesty.
| Foxy-Floof chapter 39 . 5/6
It's so sweet, and frankly, pretty damn accurate.
Lupin is living to die. Not living like he's dying. And he's always done that.
| ray9889ray chapter 18 . 5/5
ncB.C. molehill to tehachapi for escargot to the k.8 moit .
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| Rune Tobor chapter 41 . 5/4
Marriage is a social contact between two people.
Before there was a government, marriage existed.
Just because a government passed some laws doesn't mean it should have control over the subject of said laws.
The facts are that men were able to have multiple wives long ago. The one wife laws are a fairly new idea.
I consider anything after year 1 AD new. There are at least 4000 years of history before that.
| Rune Tobor chapter 33 . 5/2
It has been argued that the reason Dumbledore is so concerned with redeeming people is because he is worried about their souls being damned.
He feels the death of good people does not matter, they are in heaven.
I say BULLSHIT!
When Good stops protecting the innocent then more people choose EVIL!
The average person will choose whatever gives them, their family, the best chance of safety.
Even if that means choosing evil.
Mortals aren't supposed to redeem the fallen, that is heaven's job.
Dumbledore is a sinner, pride, hubris, betrayal, and so much more...
On another note, some say Dumbledore is not a character but a plot device.
Once again ... Bullshit ...
The old man is introduced as a character.
To those who say Dumbledore is a plot device I say that means I can decide they are plot devices and can be tortued, treated like things.
A few have started to claim Dumbledore is not perfect, that is fine, except using his lack of perfection to excuse gross negligence or incompetence does not work for anyone who holds the positions he does.
Rowling really didn't think things through...
| Rune Tobor chapter 5 . 4/29
I agree with you about Luna.
I'm Rune Tobor, sure this is an "unsigned" review, but I think it is better than "Guest".
I've been using Rune Tobor on this site for years and years.
I do have an account and I do leave reviews if I happen to be signed in.
Thanks for writing, I'm reading this for the umpteenth time, it's like revisiting an old friend.