That was the most perfect year down of Draco I have ever read, very well done.

I love how you show how magic works in this story and WHY some stuff works and others don’t. I am curious as to why none of the Blacks looked into some method of restoring her eyes considering they are the ones most aware of her overall situation?

A good smack down by Flickwick something about it is always enjoyable to read in fics that spend time in Ravenclaw

And considering the causal racism wizards hold towards muggles she could likely get away with it if she was discovered. Good chapter and yeah those sorts of details really aren’t in the wheelhouse of a kids book series

So what changed from canon that made this Dumbledore believe so hard in the prophecy when in canon he said one is only enforced when people make it so? I ask more out of curiosity then anything

I like how you handled this chapter, very well done

A good chapter, was wondering when Luna was gonna show up

Interesting schemes going on and an interesting outsiders view of the dynamics at Hogwarts

A fun chapter and it seems like James hasn’t grown much from his Hogwarts years

One would think someone like Lily would handle such a volatile situation with a bit more tack then that... also out of curiosity why wasn’t Danny just named Harry? Considering that other then what happened after being born and named nothing has really changed from canon?

It is still the summer so why didn’t Cindy bring Draco along to meet his cousin? Considering things introducing them in such a manner would make sense at least from my point of view

Good feels all around, and these Potters get to know how badly they screwed the pooch in multiple areas. Also I am curious to see how ‘Daniel’ handles/reacts to having a sister that their parents basically abandoned and never checked up on

An interesting chapter, I always saw the black family hair as more wavy with the potter hair being a more curly mess. Also if this is answered next chapter fine ignore it but how did Lily know Sirius had found Jen?

The humor in this fic is great but most would find it rather...black? I will see myself out of this review page

Wow so much rage for the people making dumb choices, well done. For me when it comes to dark stuff I can read it so long as it isn’t depression stuff and I read the tvtropes page for this series and I am interested in where this story will go