Reviews for Wrong, It's All Wrong
Guest chapter 3 . 7/15/2015
Nice I liked the cliff hanger but PLEASE don't
Amber chapter 3 . 6/27/2014
OK UPDATE ALREADY I AM DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENs
purplebookworm15 chapter 3 . 1/23/2014
Please write more. I was so upset that you didnt write more, please I am so hooked on this story.
JaclynnM chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
Ahhhhh update
Kairasiya chapter 3 . 10/30/2013
WRITE MORE PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSEEEEE
miss.lera1006 chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
so great! please more)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
seriously...how hard is it to update every few weeks? and not every 4 months, and if you are going to take that long to update..at least make the chapter big to make up for being so lazy and not updating
Guest chapter 3 . 1/29/2013
u need to update more quicker! not once every 1-2 months lol
Dramione-Fan 17 chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
This is an interesting story. Please update again soon.
toritwilight504 chapter 3 . 1/21/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEASE!
TheHelloToTheGoodbye chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
I like the idea of what ur writing about cause its original but there are some parts of the story that I was kinda confused bout like the gunshot? It was like just there with nothing attached to it cause Cato had Mike in a headlock... Also could try to describe the background cause as far as I know they could be on an alien planet in the dead of winter... Another thing u might want to fix (but u don't have to do anything I say or change anything their all just suggestions) is the numbers u write, so instead of writing 100% you could write one hundred percent and same goes for any numbers in the future...
shay98 chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
I love this sorry so far. You need to update soon!
samB chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
MORE! (PLEASE)
dontcaredontcare0111 chapter 3 . 12/24/2012
Cool update soon :-)
justdance3 chapter 3 . 12/23/2012
plzzz update son i wanna see what happens next!1
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