Reviews for Fifteen Candles and Bloodstains
Guest chapter 14 . 5/31
This story was soooo adorable and lovely and heartbreaking and beautiful! The emotions in this story were beautifully captured by your writing and the last chapter made me smile like an idiot! I'm such a fan of this! Please keep writing so I can procrastinate my homework more!
That-Flying-Breadstick-Wizard chapter 13 . 4/17
"...Aaaaaaannd that's how I met my dad, my mom, and my girlfriend." Neal finished proudly, oblivious to the open mouths and wide-eyed stares he was getting from his classmates and teacher.
lkspires chapter 14 . 3/11
I know it has been a while since you wrote this story but I wanted to let you know that I think you did an excellent job.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/8/2014
my heart physically heart reading this.
Aurora Abbot chapter 14 . 10/22/2014
Amazing! So so beautiful. This is one of the best stories out there. :)
marthapreston4 chapter 12 . 9/3/2014
after the dad attacked him the first time why wasnt neal given a protective detial or something why would they leave him alone knowing someone is out to get him
Dalamin Sahara chapter 14 . 8/29/2014
I love the story, all of it. The writing, the plot, the feelings that the story can convey, I really like to read it. Good work! I'm waiting for your next Neal's story. :D
Pirate18 chapter 14 . 8/12/2014
Man that last line was BOSS. Great job with the story ;)
numb3rs mystery chapter 14 . 5/31/2014
Oh I'm in Love with this story . It's amazing really! I feel like reading it again right now and I just finished it . It's really awesome , not to complicated but sweet and with the right amount of angst and h/c .Just love it . Definitely going to my favorite list
HAMUCHA chapter 12 . 3/28/2014
I hope Neal made it.
I wish Peter had shot the bastard in worse place such as his kneecap or elbow.
HAMUCHA chapter 4 . 3/28/2014
What the
Neal is not an adult. So shouldn't he be accompanied by an adult during questioning? His guardian or something?
Baow chapter 14 . 1/29/2014
Awesome. Would love to see Neal a FBI trainee then as Lead Agent working White Collar Crimes.
Heather Mallard chapter 14 . 1/17/2014
i want to take this oportnity to thank you for this story. I have enjoyed the ride very much. It was nice to see Neal finally getting the family he had never had and a nice twist on the show...loved this from start to finish...thanks Heather
foxy11814 chapter 14 . 1/8/2014
Great story! I enjoyed it very much!
foxy11814 chapter 4 . 1/8/2014
Very emotional chapter. Brought tears to my eyes. Just had to say that. Loving this story!
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