About your cover, there are some pretty cool AI image creator apps, you can describe what you want your cover to look like, and BOOM!

What's in the puzzle box, already?!

Last question's answer: Lily and James alive

In your last chapter there's a spelling error in Paragraph Number 49, you're welcome.

Spelling error in Paragraph Number 46. Not Niether, Neither

I'll answer your last question, I'm extremely loyal to Hermione Granger and I would hate to meet Coraline Thatcher. Sorry, Coraline, but that's the truth.

So... James never really did save Snape or he did. Time travel is so confusing.

I feel bad about the Lupin Cousin's cat dying.

God, that was real funny!

Nice... I'm excited to see what happens next. I was always interested in Harry's parents childhood. In fact, working on a book about that myself. Is this book available on kindle?

I really enjoyed your story.

The killing curse czn’t be stopped by any shield… and your typos are still annoying(especially when you quote one in your author’s note and don’t fix it). But otherwise, I’m so sad about Sirius and James…

The FR is incorrect: it isIl m’a emmenée en France,Est-ce qu’il t’a fait la cour devant la Tour Eiffel ?andNe sois pas vulgaire ».

You story’s great so far! But there are typos that can be a bit annoying sometimes, like how can the picture be taken in the common room if a «leaf would roll across it»?

Regulus overheard. James overheard. Who else is going to hear when they carelessly blab so much? Pettigrew? Nott? So many ears in the castle and on the grounds and in Hogsmead and... Thanks for an interesting and well written story.