Reviews for Debt of a Sword |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is so fucking good |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck you, this was amazing. why is it a one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is simultaneously one of the best and most devestating ending of a story I have ever read, I understand intellectually that this is the perfect ending to this story yet my heart desires for it to continue for much much longer! this is an absolute masterpiece and I thank you for writing it!3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, but out bad is it that I was rather hoping for a three-way there at the beginning? You wrote the three of them VERY CUTELY together, okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish I could review this again. it's truly a beautiful story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful one-shot, especially after reading In Flight. Like some folks said, wish this was a right and proper story so that I could remain on the Fate/Sekirei crossover high that gabriel gave me with In Flight, but this serves as a well enough alternative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() .-. |
![]() ![]() ![]() as always the best MiyaxShirou fic out there. just wish it was the length of In Flight lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking awesome I really love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing read |
![]() ![]() You can see how Gabriel improved his writing. Compared to Hill of Swords, Debt of a Sword doesn't have too many OOC moments, and the few that did happen us because of the changes in the story itself. Also, the way you didn't shoehorn this Shirou into any of the 3 routes is perfect, since it manages to bypass most of the problem with these routes: namely how Shirou tackles his ideals and his romance. Lastly, the chemistry between Shirou and Miya is seriously underrated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And if you so shamelessly proposition my Shirou again, then truce be damned, I'll..." Couldn't believe she was already unconsciously using "My" be then. I was so excited and happy when this scene happen. Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, read it a bunch of time, this is the best Fate crossover story that you had written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy fûck, bro this is good shît |