Reviews for Debt of a Sword |
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![]() ![]() ![]() as always the best MiyaxShirou fic out there. just wish it was the length of In Flight lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking awesome I really love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing read |
![]() ![]() You can see how Gabriel improved his writing. Compared to Hill of Swords, Debt of a Sword doesn't have too many OOC moments, and the few that did happen us because of the changes in the story itself. Also, the way you didn't shoehorn this Shirou into any of the 3 routes is perfect, since it manages to bypass most of the problem with these routes: namely how Shirou tackles his ideals and his romance. Lastly, the chemistry between Shirou and Miya is seriously underrated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And if you so shamelessly proposition my Shirou again, then truce be damned, I'll..." Couldn't believe she was already unconsciously using "My" be then. I was so excited and happy when this scene happen. Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, read it a bunch of time, this is the best Fate crossover story that you had written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy fûck, bro this is good shît |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muito bom |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a nice and heartwarming shortstory. I also liked that short Satsujinki mention |
![]() ![]() Amazing characterization :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Miya is no longer called Miya Asama but Miya Emiya. I know this is so late but I just wanted to put this in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really beautiful, and it was very cute seeing Miya express sekirei logic for her loved one This really hit the spot in terms of what I was looking for |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful little story. |
![]() ![]() was a woman was monster - was a woman, was a monster |