I haven't heard the song and though the lyrics seem fitting, they take away some of the punch for me (personally). You've got a really strong fic here. It's really raw and emotional. Especially the line that includes "Syndrome's monsters were laid to rest". That just seems real deep, yknow. Forgive me for being inarticulate. I've been up a looong time.

This is fantastic!

Ooh. Very nice job. Shockingly realistic, true to character, very logical plot continuation. I could see this as a scene in the movie. Very good fic.

I don't care for SyndromexMirage, but I LOVE that song!