|Reviews for Share it with the world and yell it on rooftops|
| PuchoY chapter 27 . 9/13/2014
I love it, it was so cute and sweet, I wish this actually happened.
| Milou-sarcastic-yaoiste chapter 27 . 7/30/2014
Hello ! First, I have to tell you how awesome your fiction is !
Oh. My. God.
I just spent thirty-one hours not sleeping to read your text. Really, I'm happy I went to Eyeshield 21's English fandom, and I'm glad I founded a fucking story like this !
Thank you very much for writing this story (and post it), you made my day(s) !
Then, actually, I'm french, and I'd like to translate your fiction, (to share it with the world, yell it on the roof tops and give away fly- ok, I shut up) and to do that I need your authorization.
Of course, I won't pretend it's my story or anything, and everyone will know you wrote this.
What can I say else ? Hmmm ... You're good at writing. Really. I guess I'm not the first one who tells you that bur you have to know. I didn't see much faults (maybe it's because my English is not that good ...) and I congratulate you for that.
It's been a pleasure to read this story, and I hope I'll be able to share it.
Thanks for for time, waiting for your response
Mata nee !
PS : pardon my English, 'hope it's understandable ...
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/20/2014
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL :,)
| LovelessBlue chapter 27 . 3/31/2014
This story made my top 10 within the first chapter! Loved it!
| Chester chapter 27 . 9/17/2013
There are way too few of these kinds of stories in this fandom. It was beautiful and touching. Thank you! :3
| An-Angels-Lily chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Rawr. I like it.
| Tsumujikaze Yumi chapter 27 . 8/12/2013
sO Cool ! thanks for this Magic Story ! :D
Sena and Youichi were so cute!
| Zephy.rose chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
there are few things in life i will pull a" fan girl squeal"over but it seems i'm doing that a lot reading this story wow your good thanks for the awesome read
| Fujo21 chapter 26 . 4/30/2013
OMG! i love this part! xD *slap
i really, really, REAAALLLYYYY LIKKEE -IMEAN LOVE THIS FANFIC! :D /slap
best fanfic ever.. its make my heart sound "ba-thump" all the time! x/D
keep up the good work btw ;D
| FaLyn9 chapter 4 . 4/26/2013
I llove how many "fucks" are in a sentence when Hiruma speaks
| FaLyn9 chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
i love all the curse words here, its funny
| Fictional.Insanity chapter 27 . 4/21/2013
The cutest story, for the cutest couple.
Thank you for writing this masterpiece! :)
| Fictional.Insanity chapter 17 . 4/21/2013
HAHAHAHA! Okay I just HAD to comment on this chapter!
Hiruma when Mamori knocked on the door and everything was SO FREAKING HILARIOUS!
I nearly peed myself when I read that little excerpt. This story so far is absolute gold.
I always knew they'd make a perfect couple! X3
| yoshimoriXsenXgen chapter 27 . 3/24/2013
I have a request! Can you make a riku and kamiya love story I cant find a lot of those and I just loved this story so can you?
| charm13insomnia chapter 27 . 3/19/2013