Reviews for True Destiny
I-Was-Here2345 chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Loved this!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
I loved that ending ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Now that is definitely how it should have ended. Hot as hell! ;)
1sunfun chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Nice.
NinaNun chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
That was awesome I like that you had him Mark her like in your Paul fic.
sexysiren1981 chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Really nice take on breaking dawn :) lol love how she ended up with jake and also loved how the pack was with them at the end...very cool
mrs-taycob chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
loved it 3
alh1971 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Amazing story- I loved how primal their mating was, combined with the witnessing of the pack...
FlyOnMax chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Honestly, the thought of a dozen guys watching you lose your virginity seems like a bit of a turn-off to me, but your writing is great. And I lack knowledge about Twilight in general, since I could only stand to read the first three books.
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Wow. That was something else. I often felt Edward must have had some mind trick on Bella for her to be stupid enough to want him over Jake. This puts it together so well and brings the pack in to care for her. Nice story.
xXxAngel-With-A-ShotgunxXx chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
I loved this. It was great. A very good job.
PinkPiggy chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I wish there was more):
LCB chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Good job jake. Great imagery!
sweetness4683 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Interesting element with the pack
babiluv22 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
aww i wish there was more
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