Reviews for The Black Aura
john chapter 3 . 1/26/2013
very good
Guest chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
Honestly it's not that good. An aura can't be changed in color, not by killing someone especially. It's a predestined thing. Plus, Jeremy seemed kind of...overpowered. He just suddenly had the power of Time? Josh only got that since his hook is the Sword of Aether.
siriusfreddobbylupin chapter 2 . 6/25/2012
This is a good story so far. I definitely see potential. However, I agree with the other reviewer who wondered why Sophie is immortal. Anyway, it's a good story, so please keep updating!
Whyhow chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Interesting story so far. I don't exactly see how Sophie became immortal, but otherwise it seems like a possible sequel. Please update.