|Reviews for Jinchurriki of apocalypse: rebirth of chaos|
| draugeltheshadowhero chapter 18 . 6h ago
I would love to sign this petition but I do not know how someone out side of US and not a citizen can sign it.
| Shadow Knight Destroyer chapter 18 . 7h ago
It's useless no ones listening. How did they listen when it happened last time, we went over the votes?!
| Mugen7 chapter 18 . 10h ago
Ah, the classic memory erase. *Sigh* Unlucky Kotei, but take your time. Been really enjoying your this (think this is my first review?) and I'm looking forward to future chapters and how the story progresses.
Pairings... Well, seeing a NarutoxErza.K would be nice. However I would wonder how you'd plan that pairing out. I mean Knightwalker is a resident of Edolas and there'd have to be a good reason/plot for how she transfers to Earthland (guess you could do what NeoShadow did with one of his story's and have Knightwalker sucked into the Anima because of an item that - either belongs to her or someone else - originates from Earthland, hence, having traces of Magic or Ethernano in it).
Plus, with the pairing I can see Erza.S just being spiteful towards them. Naruto is someone she dislike (or really hates) and Knightwalker, could represent everything she hates about herself and doesn't want to become (since Edolas counterparts are in one way or another opposites of their Earthland selves - for some people) and the two of them together (possibly friends with benefits into something more?) could really push a few buttons in her that'd make her uncomfortable.
Anyway just have to wait and see what you decide in the end. Till next time.
| eighth hokage chapter 18 . 11h ago
Naruto x erza K. Would be the best and it would bug erza S a lot since she is seeing herself with naruto who she despises.
| XxGreekOtakuxX chapter 18 . 13h ago
With the edolas erza man a way you can take her with you is if some how naruto or for a reason somebody gave her a little of his magic for a duration or what ever and the anime should suck her in also .I also like the redhead pairing with naruto for this fic think about it :)
| Me'o D Theguh chapter 18 . 14h ago
I like naruto x erza k
| Codegeass 199995 chapter 18 . 17h ago
Do you know that SOPA is back that's right that damn bill that takes away creativity sign that Petition now on White
| Calen chapter 18 . 18h ago
Keep it no pairings. If you have to do something do it friends with benefits or just random casual. Heh like Naruto and Flare lol.
| OBSERVER01 chapter 18 . 18h ago
naruto x erZa k.
| Pain4ever chapter 18 . 3/12
I've been thinking about the pairing since you announced NarutoxErza K... I understand they are similar in personality, but isn't she important to Edolas' construction,after the Edolas arc? Last time I remember Erza K. Was 100% loyal to Edolas, based on her overall character. I would vote for a Narutox Mira paring,however, I'll wait...
You left a hole on how Marajane
| Enguarde Swordfish 007 chapter 17 . 3/9
I place this fanfic on my favorites but I never gave you a review so here goes.
I like the overall story. I liked the Naruto character you portrayed. Really reminds me of Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho. However I feel like there's a major hiccup in between Erza's fight with Naruto and The guild war arc.
He went from hating humanity and not giving shit about people to going out of his way to inspire fairy tail to fight back. It's not bad that you have him change its the fact that you didn't ease us into it. We were pretty much dropped in the middle of the arc not knowing what was going on. I had to act like everything was like cannon. There seemed to be a 2 year timeskip from the time he joined and there wasn't enough interaction between the guild an Naruto to make him change like that.
Why did Mira slap Erza? Was she defending Naruto. They haven't had a single line of dialogue together.
Why did Natsu stop Erza? The only interaction I've seen is Naruto slapping him around a bit.
Believe it or not he changed and you haven't shown the interaction between him and the guild that may have lead to it. The chapter where the dragon are having there meeting is a perfect place to show it. Show Naruto interacting with some of the teams or lesser characters as they get their jobs from him, have Mira bartend and help calm the atmosphere, Makarov can make Erza take her jobs from Naruto forcing them to communicate outside tense circumstances, Have Laxus find out about this deal between Naruto and Makarov, What would his reaction be to Naruto getting to lead a branch guild while he gets nothing, Have Minato tried to talk to Naruto, Kakashi can just go over there to hangout and Naruto might discover more about his father, Kushina can try cooking him home cooked meals to try and open his heart. There's a lot you can show to bridge the gap between those chapters.
I thought i supported Naruto being with Knightwalker but then I started to think about it. I originally started reading this because it was a Naruto and Erza fanfic. I enjoyed it from when they first met because most of the time I read something with romance between two characters in this crossover things just fall into place. So imagine my surprise when they are at each others throat right of the bat. Knightwalker will probably understand that the ends justify the means. Her and Naruto will be on the same page on many ideas and I think that might be boring. Scarlet hates the idea of killing and with how Naruto see things there will always be conflict. But the journey of Erza teaching Naruto restraint and Erza learning that sometimes the deed has to be done for the greater good can be interesting. Honestly I wanted to see Naruto go to the tower to get some insight on why Erza feels killing is so wrong.
If you do continue with the Knightwalker pairing, How are you going to seperate her from her kingdom? She was willing to kill tens of thousand to give magic to her king.
I think you had a good idea with Naruto taking some of the mages with him to form a guild. You're weakening fairy tail but your smashing cannon with a brick which is more important.
Overall i think its a good story except with that hiccup. If you can show more interaction with the guild then we can see how Naruto's characters transform rather than having him fly solo all the time.
| Tempestuous God of Valour-77 chapter 17 . 3/4
Please update man!
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 15 . 2/22
Crossover was good, read it in KitsuneDragon's Story though.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 17 . 2/15
Hopefully Minato and Kushina or even the others teach Naruto about Chakra and even Ninjutsu.
You wrote Dusk was looming twice in like 3 lines.
Some great usage of The Hobbit. Interesting with the gifts especially the gem when I was reading it I was thinking of The Sllmarllion currently reading that book. So was thinking that the gem was a Silmaril.
Curious as to what Tauriel will give Naruto, see mystery.
Was Tauriel suppose to be Catalina or something? Only ask about the end of what you wrote, seems like Tauriel knew Naruto before reading his emotions.
Wow great cliff hanger. Naruto will use his chakra?
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 16 . 2/15
Planetary Rasengan, one of the best Rasengan jutsu's.
Great fight scene with the dragon.
The crossover within a crossover was a good experiment