Reviews for Jinchurriki of apocalypse: within darkness
Guest chapter 19 . 8/25
Your writing is awful. Just quit the site.
Zero-Tails317 chapter 1 . 8/18
Well, grammar could use some work, but I'm interested. Let's see where this goes.
Guest chapter 15 . 8/12
Chapter fifteen and your not making sense. Make the story more boring will you? Dumbass I'm leaving. I seriously don't want to read another persons bullshit when they throw fucking logic and shit out the window like a rabid fangirl/boy.
SuzuWuzu chapter 1 . 8/8
Skimmed through the chapters and I can honestly say...what a bitch. Your story is exactly like the other poof that has written a apocalypse dragon story. All the rage and hate blah blah blah and in the end he's just a faggot, if your going to redeem him in the first plce then why pair him with the most malevolent dragon? I wish some one would grow some fucking balls and portray an acctual representation of what any character would be like being the son of ancolgia.

Grow a pair bitch
DannyPhantom619 chapter 1 . 5/25
I vote Naruto x Erza Scarlet
LeifArgn chapter 3 . 2/10
i wish you put some translation in the techniques naruto uses...
shichi19 chapter 19 . 12/1/2015
hmm... interesting, that's all I can say, good luck with your projects (stories) and hoping to read the updates soon I'm rather curious to how you'll introduce Gaara to Naruto, then there's also Jiraiya and Itachi but, most of all, to see Acnologia again in the sequel, in Tenrou, and also Zeref.
and thank you, for not having canon pairing or someone with 'major character'~!
Thank you for this Author's note for the news, good luck again~!
blacklightning1 chapter 18 . 11/26/2015
i really liked this chapter
blacklightning1 chapter 19 . 11/26/2015
please update soon
Guest chapter 3 . 11/20/2015
hmhmhmhahahah how interesting
TheMysteriousPerson -0-'-0 chapter 19 . 11/13/2015
Damn hope for the soon
Guest chapter 19 . 10/15/2015
Destiny you are not the only one is I am to can't get enough of destony
Guest chapter 19 . 10/15/2015
The moment you said taken king, I understood your predicament...
patrick.dejong94 chapter 19 . 10/16/2015
noticed this note before reading and i wonder if there's any romance in the air of this story (kinda like that)
HitmaN007 chapter 19 . 10/15/2015
okay ,we fans will wait
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