|Reviews for Bring Them to Their Knees|
| Bryse chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
I'm sorry to see this story be abandoned. It was one of the best I've read on here as far as syots go. I read all the way through Tears of Blood and followed this story up to the point where it left off. I thought every chapter was beautifully written and it sucks that I won't ever see what happens to my favorite characters, like Admire or Jonas. I always really enjoyed reading and have still been checking it every once in awhile to see if someone did update. If anyone in charge of this does by chance see this, then really take into consideration finishing this story. Its way to good to just be abandoned, despite what certain leaders of 24tributes24authors might have to say.
| One With Sense chapter 64 . 3/11/2014
HAHAHAHAHAHA I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN, U FAILED, HAHAHAHAHA! You'll never update again because this story is one big fail, hence why I left
| intuwisdom chapter 64 . 3/3/2014
Yey. I got an account. :3
| Daisy-Ree chapter 64 . 1/24/2014
I changed my mind; Lucian is amazing, how can you think he's a freak?
| Daisy-Ree chapter 64 . 12/24/2013
If I wanted anyone to win, it'd have to be Jet...it's not like I've been cheering or anything...maybe.
Jet's epic. Stuff Sean, Aleah can live without him.
| Eve chapter 64 . 12/23/2013
It has taken me almost a month to read through this fanfiction, reading hours each night and I must know what happens next! All of the authors are spectacular and the quarter quell arena is everything a quieter quell should be, horrifying, each tribute having to face their own personal demons ahh! None of these characters have been cookie cutter or boring! And must I say Lucian is the most disturbing character I have ever read...seriously being in his mind freaks me out!
I do hope that there is more to come, I'll feel crushed if this story has been abandoned!
Also in desperate need to know what is happening to Sean (absolute favourite!) and Damian and Anya! Xxxx
| Daisy-Ree chapter 64 . 12/21/2013
Update :( This is one of the best stories ever
| Loverofallthingsmusic chapter 64 . 12/22/2013
Wow! This is amazing...
You have certainly gotten the theme of the Quarter Quell down solid: punishment.
Each tribute is so unique, like in the 24th Games. You have the normal Careers, but then there's Atalanta (the non-Career Career), Maeve (Death's Messenger), Lucian (I don't know exactly what to call him...the sadistic, bloodthirsty, evil tribute hellbent on destroying the Careers), Sean Armani (Aleah's twin brother), the male District 7 tribute [Jonas(?), the mayor's son, the cellist...]...
Each tribute has a story, and this is sooo amazing, what you've done. You've had me hanging at the edge ofy seat for days, and we're not even done yet!
That being said, I sincerely hope you continue this story. It's WAY too good NOT to continue!
Great job so far! :)
| DeletedAccount3498 chapter 3 . 10/12/2013
Wow, this is different, and exciting. I love both of these tributes, Jet and Sade, who are both memorable and realistic. I like how they see each other, and how despite Sade's opinion that Jet is strong and murderous, he's actually chock full of paranoia.
I also love the letter, I can't wait to read District 11's reaping chapter, and find out more about Eric.
| DeletedAccount3498 chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
Wow, Admire is already an interesting character, and Canicus too. I feel as if I've known them for ages, and I feel really sorry for Canicus' sister. It seems she believes he'll make it back, and knowing the Hunger Games, that is unlikely. Also, Admire's ulcer sure makes things interesting, I wonder if she'll really get it fixed in the capitol, or if the ulcer isn't even there like her mother insisted. Maybe it's just a case of placebo, where she thinks it's there, and consequently feelings the effects, as if it's there.
| TrystaneBent chapter 64 . 9/9/2013
Absolutely LOVED this chapter and how Lucian and Atalanta fight together, though I'd prefer to see Jonas or Anya like victors, best characters ever, honestly.
I really hope you update as soon as you can, this story is just so perfect.
| Doysen chapter 64 . 9/7/2013
This series of fan fiction is amazing! I love the character development and how you are able to connect and get the perspective of each tribute! I look forward to reading more!
| Catolover123 chapter 64 . 8/29/2013
Sorry, didn't feel like logging in on my laptop :/ Thiis was a crazy chapter that i felt was better then the past chapters of Lucian, i think. Anyway, no complaints here, other then it took FOREVER to read-like honestly half an hour on my phone because i kept having to go back and read certain parts xD
But i guess it helped because then I understood everything pretty clear. nothing too bad in this one, and really, i felt the dialogue was the best part, all the emotions were spot on. Loved it. The thing that bothers me about this author (other then they write a lot) is that they tend to ramble on a little bit at some parts, sometime explaining things a little too much. Surprising, there wasn't many mistakes and only a few errors were missed.
I;m also a little confused about lucian and how he feels. Sometimes it's hard to tell whether he is normal or feeling evil or what he's feeling. idk, maybe that's the point. *facepalm* Anyway, other then that, Lucian is not my favorite character because really this guy is sick in the head, very much like the Jett guy and Admire, which i really don't like them too much. but I have to say, if anyone were to win, i think this kid and atalanta is crazy and dangerous enough to kill a lot of people, which is why i hope Jonas and Sean kill him before that happens.
Wait; just more questions. When will we see anya or aleah again? Because they rock and i think we've seen both teams now...the careers and the 4 Horses (which is just 2 now). Another thing, did Meave really die because i couldn't tell if Lucian was lying or not. (Lucian please stop lying so much it's frustrating!) xD
So yeah, please next chapter be aleah/sean or anya and damian because i LOVE the Danya pairing. K, my review is done.
P.S. Danya ftw :D
| DX chapter 52 . 8/20/2013
I hope Jonas(District 7) wins
| starlightwalking chapter 64 . 8/16/2013
Well... that was disturbing. As always, Lucian's chapter is beautifully written and scary. I would say more, but I am at a loss for words. I think "disturbing" pretty much sums it up.