Reviews for Trial by Ninja |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Sakura’s growing two will be hilarious, doubly so if she isn’t aware for a while |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking finally a Sakura centric fic with the balls to stop Sasuke from leaving |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see Ebisu get some time to shine |
![]() ![]() Wow this was good! At first I was surprised with the direction you were taking kabuto in and honestly was lulled into a false sense of security with the fact that up until the second half of the fic, he didn't seem to do anything evil at all. But wow was i surprised and happy when it turned out that he was the antagonist all along! You write him really well and I'm very happy with his characterisation :) I also loved how sakura really ended up being a front line fighter, even with her limitations in place. In fact the limitation you gave to her made the story so much more immersive because it didn't feel like she was showing off all of this power with no effort, it instead felt like she really had yo work to understand her abilities, and put in effort to master a handful of techniques! Thank you so much for writing this! I'm now going to devour the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's so satisfying to find someone that thinks the same about the naruto fandom and has the same hangups about the typical fanfic dynamics and preference for how to address the faults in canon in a way that makes for a good fanfic to read rather than a convoluted mess of "i'm annoyed about this part of canon so here's a whole fanfic about why this part is so annoying". This fic has been fantastic and i loved the way you developed Sakura ever so slightly differently and the way you showed complexities, and also that you gave her her own sort of antagonist that's feasible in relation to her canon counterpart, a combat medic. though the only part i might disagree with in opinion is that i prefer that the post-canon power scaling to be disregarded. that part always annoyed me about canon, we went from cool ninja fights and tactics and missing nin, to moon goddesses and flashlight shows, what place do pre-canon ninja battles and life have amongst literal reincarnated gods fighting? Also, last note, i always end up so bitter about Sakura never getting a pass on things compared to her teammates and clan kids, ugh so frustrating, cant wait to read the sequel, i hope Tsunade is kind with the leash she tied around around Sakura's neck for things that weren't really her fault. Great fic, loved it, 10/10 would recommend! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If he's allowed to use chidorici feel like shr should totally be alloeed to use medical rasengan of doom |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her obsession with sasuke is really creepy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story for a Sakura centric one, growing stronger without ridiculous gimmicks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() truly a great story |
![]() ![]() Una cosa que realmente odio de Naruto es el descarado favoritismo que le Dan los hokages a Naruto. Parece que le sale el sol del trasero. Y esto lo ilustra bien, el cómo si hubiese sido Naruto, no hubiese pasado ni un día en la cárcel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story. Great characterization & showing of how Sakura can be strong without any real power-ups. I also loved Sakura's realistic thought process when leaving konoha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Is that... a Princess Bride reference? |
![]() ![]() ![]() GIRL FORGET THAT EMO ASS LICKING BITCH Your way too good for his ugly ass. Forget boys in general, focus on getting stronger and surpassing them all |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oop- so he ain't leaving Thats cool too I guess |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sakura, hunny... I'm really comtemplating on wanting to sock you in the face... I love her character but her undying love for her Sasuke-kun always did annoying the shit outta me. Hopefully she becomes stronger after that emo duck ass leaving (more than the canon too... I want some changes with her in this which would at least put her on par with her team mates) |