Practice is the secret to many things. Thanks for writing.

the story is amazing and i like the changes happening in sakura i hope you continue and good job on your work

good that sakura and sasuke are gettibg along better

Very interesting direction.

Just so you know, I reallyu love this story and cant wait for a update I'll be waiting...and watching OwO

I've read your story thus far- and you have gained My respect. Completely. Youve obviously been working hard and considering all the angles Sakura could've possibly taken- and have left me surprised with all of them! I appreciate your originality- literally, most people deviate slightly from the story line- you've flip it backwards into a lake where it promptly combusted and was reborn from its ashes as the love child of Epic-Style and kickassery inbetseen the sheets of orginiality. Seriously.
The trick with ebisu pulling sakura's blindfold down in the restaurant- that was from a show called Psych right? Seeing that used made my day :D
-EC

You're theories on chakra control and nature are almost identical to my own. For that reason I'm truely enjoying your fiction. I look forward to reading more.

On a side note it really get me thinking on what Naruto could be. All it takes to master a nature is practice, the same could be argued for pure control though it seems to have a very steep learning curve once you're past anything above water walking and chakra molding, that is the reduction in number of hand signs to preform a technique, is much in the same vein. With the copious amounts of clones Naruto can create to practice relatively mundane tasks and the near infinite supply of chakra, nothing is really out of his grasp. He could and should be able to throw around water dragons with a single hand sign just like the Nidaime. With enough practice of course.

Its honestly a true shame he never really received any true care and attention in the ninja arts. Even from one of the most precious people in his life, his godfather.

So glad I found this story! I really admire how you are developing sakura's character :)

A good story until now. Just a question: how is that nobody outed Kabuto yet?

This is such an amazing and unique Sakura-Centric fic, please update soon!

Awesome!

I love how you explain ninjutsus in each chapter! Very informative! Perfect, just perfect. :3

Awesome story!
:)

I absolutely love this idea *sigs in wonder*

That scene in the restaurant was rather similar to one of the flashback scenes in Psych - the one which showed Henry's training Shawn's observational skills.

If that is where you're going with this, I can't wait for what's next :)

Lol. Creepy omake.

But yes. Awesome! Sakura stopped Sasuke from leaving! First I've ever read. I absolutely love this so far. Sakura is still Sakura: she's still slightly annoying since she persists in her Sasuke-obsession, but she's improving. Hopefully she'll learn to grow out of it. Whether she genuinely begins to love him or she finds someone better, though I of course hope for the latter, I'd be happy.

Another thing, I absolutely love her teachers! This is the first time I've read anything going into any depth of Ebisu's character and I really appreciate it! It is extremely true that sometimes, the people who are best (known or otherwise) in their profession may not be the best teachers. Actually, often they really aren't. I hold out hope that Kabuto remains a Konoha-nin (and seeing how I love your Kabuto so far, maybe even becomes Sakura's love interest - he's not that much older than her).

There are so many wonderful things about this. Writing style. Character development. Story line. Detailing of medical and ninja theories and techniques. Scene descriptions. It's just overall wonderful. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to finishing the next three posted chapters and reading your future updates!