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/Wow, omakes, are better than the regular story.

jon reeve

/The omake XD Yeah, that always struck me as convenient. Probably just anime rules, but you're right; it could be that Sakura is a better "ninja" than anyone gives credit for.

/Naruto was also more competant in the general ninja arts than Sasuke in the series, especially towards the beginning. Sasuke just had better body coordination; that's about it. The only reason it doesn't matter is, again, anime rules.

This was an amazingly well-written fanfiction! I can't wait to read the sequel!

Omake, so true

I'd like to say that I finished reading this story a few days ago and then yesterday while going home after a busy day of exams I thought about this omake for some reason and started giggling even though I usually don't even laugh out loud when I'm reading or thinking about funny things.

It felt nice.

Thank you.

Well. If your goal was to write a Sakura-grows-ovaries story, you've definitely succeeded in writing a codifying example thereof. But Young!Fū is so adorable, and your Kakashi so enjoyably lazy, your Sasuke so non-retarded, and of course your Sakura so three dimensional that I find myself practically required to read your sequel. Thank you!

Ninja William Wilberforce. *snerks*

*thinks*

Ninja William Willierforce. I'm going to have to remember that.

Wow. I love the detail you've put into the Jutsu theft squad. It really sells the "day in the life of a shinobi" feel. And the Princess Bride references are both appropriate and funny.

This fic is pretty old but I figured you wouldn't mind a review! Found this through a rec and devoured it in one afternoon. I adore how you've written all the characters here - I actually can't fault you on any, and that is seriously, seriously rare when reading naruto fic (and I think you would agree with me given your final AN). I like it when Sakura isn't sidelined, but fics that do it tend to overpower her instead - and this is seriously canon compliant, which I love. I agree with you about the crazy power ups and drawing a straight line for growth, and I really appreciate your execution of it. I really like your writing style as well, and am going straight to your profile to find the sequel!

This story was seriously awesome! Hands down one of my favorite Naruto fanfics of all time, and for sure among the Sakura-centric ones :D

Huh. I hate canon Haruno - and, for that matter, the entire Team 7 because all four are complete assholes - but this high quality fanfic managed to make me like them all. Kudos to you! :D

I normally don't review but I had to comment on your tribute to pysch! That is by far my favorite show and I love the reference to the hat game Henry puts Shawn through

Przyjemne

You write really well and I love the deviations of this story from the series. I especially liked how you portrayed Sakura. You made it so believed. Can't wait to read more.. Hmm.. Poor sai though got left behind

I fall in love with kabuto in this chapter