I fall in love with kabuto in this chapter

i don't trust kabuto

but i dig the way you handled sakura's kill

EBISU WHAT A GENIUS MOVE I AM SCREAMING!

I was kind of hoping to see you drop a "I say no." And Bam the floor drops and Sakura disappears from the village leaving with a smirk and a baffled council.

But understandable how it would be difficult to make a story around it. Heading off to the sequel, loved every chapter of this story though.

Very interesting fic, with some really great humor! Also, re: the third end note, about plot holes: Do you have any idea how HARD that can be with a canon rife with plot holes?! Seriously, some of the toughest spots to write in my current Harry Potter / Naruto crossover are finding ways to explain the dumb %$& Dumbledore did in canon without painting him as evil, insane, or senile.

This was totally wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it!
Keep up the awesome work!
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Isn't torture a bit redundant in most cases when you have mind-fuck no jutsu?

Well that was amazing

Chpt 4 omake is hilarious ('w')*

Lol that's the best sasuke-leaving-connflict-resolution that I've ever seen.
It kind of reminded me that they are both kids when the conversation was basically "hey I wanna play too"
"Well,you can't"
"Then I'm TELLING!"

I'm in love with this fic. Kabuto as a mentor/antagonist is genius, and I'm so, so happy to see a fic with Sakura as a protagonist that doesn't focus at all on romance, as most fics that don't hate on her too. She had so much potential but was put on a backburner and that pisses me off. Thanks for sharing!

Saaaadnesss, Sakuraaaaa nooooooo, whhhyy

That omake... poor kakashi.

I am very displeased with Sakuras decision... very fucking displeased!

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