Reviews for Trial by Ninja |
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![]() ![]() Dahahaha Princess Bride reference! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay. loved it. also update the sequel. and 2 questions. 1.) what the Heck happened to Sai? is he still at that farmers house? is he dead? 2.) What WAS KASKASHI GONNA TELL SAKURA?! WHAT?! I'll never know peace! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this fic! The way you developed Sakura, and the rest of the characters was fantastic, along with the world building you did around the other villages, their interactions, and intervillage politics. Of course I knew from the beginning Kabuto was a traitor, but I still felt so awful for Sakura. He was one of her good friends, who helped her out when she needed it, and it hurt that he was playing her the whole time (even if I think he did actually grow to like her - hence the invitation to Sound). I had a lot of fun reading it, and in the end, Tsunade got the apprentice she always really wanted :). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice omake. I'm glad it's not just me that finds ANBU strangely ineffective. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story. Your characters terse were balanced quite well - no one felt overpowered and the plot made sense. Your Sakura and Kabuto were especially great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Princess Bride references make me so happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sakura, Sasuke, Naruto, and nearly everyone in the canon cast of characters is one note and unlikable as fuck throughout the entire series. You spend quite a bit of time getting from irritating nonsensical cunt to irritating cunt, which is the right thing to do when writing a story. Unfortunately, I hate the fuck out of her character when it resembles canon, so I didn't really like this story. What I'm trying to say is that this is a well written story, but I don't like it. I love the fuck out of most of your other shit though! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I just finished this, and I loved it! Now going to read the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES YES SASUSAKU MOMENTS! Also Sai is too funny bahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im still pretty upset thay Tsunade is not Sakura's mentor... BUT KAKASHI-SASUKE-SAKURA MOMENTS DEFINITELY MADE UP FOR IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOOHOO BADASS SAKURA FOR THE WIN |
![]() ![]() ![]() "PEEL THAT GIRL OFF THE WALL" BAHAHAHAHA TSUNADE DOESNT MESS AROUND! AND THAT OMAKE TOO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE THIS FIC! YOUR DEPICTION OF NARUTO IS SO PRECIOUS! AND THE OMAKE IS GOLD |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAAAYY GO SAKURA |