Reviews for Trial by Ninja |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YESSS SAKURA HAS MAD SKILLZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY CRAP SUCH A GOOD START! IM HOOKED ALREADY |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just think Kabuto rolling a d1 and rubbing someones thigh with his palm trying to cut their femoral artery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dun, Dun, DUN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story deserves a follow-up and a lot more love than it has gotten. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was such a good read. :)) very different from a lot of fics. thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Came across this gem on a recommendation list on a blog, couldn't be happier to have lost five hours of sleep reading it. As it goes to the author's stated goals post-script: nailed it. Absolutely nailed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome characterization! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! Great story. I also agree with you 100% on the author's notes. While using Kabuto is a little odd, it was much better than Tsunade, imho. If you do decide to do another story like this, I would like to see Sakura get mentored by Kurenai. I don't think that I've seen this, but I think that it would be fitting. Maybe they can use genjutsu on themselves to give them aiming reticules? I'm not sure, but Kurenai made a career out of an obscure branch of ninja magic that should suit Sakura well. Tsunade's combat "skills" seem more like Naruto's style than Sakura's, am I right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that this might be my favorite among your excellent works, jacobk. I think it's hilarious that Kakashi feels it's perfectly fine to read his porn while stuck in that genjutsu. Why did he yell at Sakura that she shouldn't try to learn genjutsu, though? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I liked Sakura a lot, and I liked the relationships she had with each of her teammates. I'm a little upset that she just left Sai somewhere and forgot about him, but I guess he can take care of himself. I liked that this Sasuke was able to see the value in his teammates, probably because he spent more time with them. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So what happened to Sai? Sakura just left him to die and no further comments...really random. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! It was beautiful. Your Sakura was amazing and I really liked her. Yeah well, I totally wished canon Sakura was like yours. And I totally agree about how Sakura was an underdeveloped character in canon. Definitely reading the sequel! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this i love this I love this story! It's so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh woah no. Hell no. No no no no no. I don't like it. I don't like this at all. Oh whyyyyy I hate Kabutoooooo! Why is he so annoying and destroys everything *cries* |