Reviews for The Snow Phoneix
Mashkai30 chapter 4 . 5/18/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
The Dark Lord has taken over Wizarding Britian. Harry was betrayed by his friends. Now the Dark Lord along with his two lovers are looking four him they love him and want him at their side. Chap. 3 UPDATED!

um you do know four is a number right...? i think you meant for...
Mistress of Darkness32 chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
I absolutely love your story. I hope there will be more of it to read soon, but until then I will be waiting. Also, is Harry a Snow Phoneix and was Fawkes Lilly and James's missing mate?
NotBatman52 chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
for updating soon... this is pretty long... it's 2013..
Melikalilly chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
I like this story
97vamp chapter 3 . 3/28/2013
i don't like cliffhangers...but then i guess it wouldn't be as good a story. you have to put up more chapters...the suspense is killing me!
Ashley chapter 3 . 1/26/2013
Please update its been over a month! Thank you
kage kitsune 14 chapter 3 . 1/21/2013
Oh dear...

Update soon.
Flying Chrissy chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Interesting! Look forward to the next update.
yaoilover1992-2010 chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
i really like this story please continue.
xxdarkxxalicexx chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
The first chapter was alright, but it all went downhill from there. First you say Harry disappeared two years before he turned 16, so he was 14 at the time, but Harry says he disappeared after his fifth year, so he'd almost be 16. Then you say Katherine was a few years younger than Harry and graduated the previous year, so wouldn't that make Harry at least 18 or 19? And why would Katherine use a knife instead of her wand to kill Harry? Lucius is too proud to admit to swallowing a fly, especially to someone he likes. What's with Harry clinging to Severus anyway? And why would Severus let him cling to him? You haven't made any mention of them being on good terms before Harry disappeared. Why'd Fawkes choose that day to lead Tom, Lucius, and Severus to Harry? Why not sooner? And if it was so urgent, why didn't he immediately turn into his human form to explain the situation? Why would Harry be so accepting of Tom's and Lucius' presence? Why could Dumbledore only be able to scratch out half of a rule? How'd Harry know to rudely barge into the room when Fawkes revealed Hedwig? How'd Sirius and Remus know Harry was there? Tom, Lucius, and Severus were with Harry from the time he interrupted the meeting until they arrived. Why'd it take five weeks for Harry to heal when he was apparently "uninjured and sleeping peacefully" within a few hours? How'd his hair grow so quickly? Why doesn't he cut it or put it in some type of bun? You said it went down to his knees and the floor, so how does that work? And if he has "mile long legs" and is only 4'8" then wouldn't that give him a really short torso and arms? What exactly do Tom, Severus, and Lucius plan on doing with Harry? And what's he been doing since he was let out of the hospital wing? They haven't made any kind of romantic advances on him, or even talked to each other about courting him as far as I can see. If Sirius knew Lily and James were missing a mate, why didn't he tell them? I really don't mean to flame, but everything after the first half of the first chapter just really confused me, and either way, I can't wait for the next chapter. I just had to get this all out, but please update soon?
petit.dragon25 chapter 3 . 12/25/2012
which was the third companion parent is Harry?
darkcutey chapter 3 . 12/25/2012
Loved the chapter PLEASE update SOON!ยก!
UmbrasLupas chapter 2 . 11/6/2012
i want more
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
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