Reviews for The Snow Phoneix
Venquine1990 chapter 2 . 10/19/2012
Dear Dagon's Flame of Life

I'm a little confused. You said they've been searching for a year and that Sirius died. But Sirius died little over a month before Harry's sixteenth birthday and according to your story he now is sixteen. What's up with that? Could you please explain?
Thanks in advance,

Venquine1990
moonlitcat chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
more more more
moomoomoores chapter 2 . 9/20/2012
Love it :D
thedancingelk chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
I enjoy the plot, but if I may offer some constructive criticism, the grammar in these past 2 chapters is lacking. I would suggest getting a beta to offer up some options to tweak it a bit, in order to help the narrative flow a little better. Again, wonderful idea, needs a little work on the execution. Can't wait for chapter 3! :)
adenoide chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
But who attack Harry?
adenoide chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
It's that why I hate Dumby and his follower.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
please continue
WyrdSmith chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
But ... Who was the chick with the knife?!
karisaren chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
This is good.
I love story about evil Dumbledore. And good: Snape, Tom and Lucius.

Please continue writing!
A Smouldering Soul chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
Interesting chapter
darkcutey chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
Loved it can't wait for next chapter
LawofConservationofMass chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Moe!
belladu57 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
good_
darkcutey chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This sounds very good can't wait for next chapter
annamounce999 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Please complete the story!
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