|Reviews for The Snow Phoneix|
| Venquine1990 chapter 2 . 10/19/2012
Dear Dagon's Flame of Life
I'm a little confused. You said they've been searching for a year and that Sirius died. But Sirius died little over a month before Harry's sixteenth birthday and according to your story he now is sixteen. What's up with that? Could you please explain?
Thanks in advance,
| moonlitcat chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
more more more
| moomoomoores chapter 2 . 9/20/2012
Love it :D
| thedancingelk chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
I enjoy the plot, but if I may offer some constructive criticism, the grammar in these past 2 chapters is lacking. I would suggest getting a beta to offer up some options to tweak it a bit, in order to help the narrative flow a little better. Again, wonderful idea, needs a little work on the execution. Can't wait for chapter 3! :)
| adenoide chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
But who attack Harry?
| adenoide chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
It's that why I hate Dumby and his follower.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
| WyrdSmith chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
But ... Who was the chick with the knife?!
| karisaren chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
This is good.
I love story about evil Dumbledore. And good: Snape, Tom and Lucius.
Please continue writing!
| A Smouldering Soul chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
| darkcutey chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
Loved it can't wait for next chapter
| LawofConservationofMass chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
| belladu57 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
| darkcutey chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This sounds very good can't wait for next chapter
| annamounce999 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Please complete the story!