Reviews for Book 1: Divergent Path: rewrite
Eurasian Lynx chapter 69 . 8/6/2016
My experience with this book right now:

"Okay I didn't have time to read earlier, time to read update 66!"

There's now 69.

"...Well then."
BlueWings900 chapter 67 . 8/6/2016
Wonder how the kids and Athy responded to the news.

Great chapter, lots of emotion. Liked the bit with Thomas and Solomon at the end. Kinda curious what Thomas meant by aiding Solomon. Like, is he gonna offer the freezing bit to him, or is he actually gonna try to enhance solomon more to make him immortal so he can be with Seth longer? Pretty sure he's gonna end up frozen cuz of EM, but it's still an interesting thought on making a methuselah something closer to immortal.
BlueWings900 chapter 66 . 8/6/2016
Noooo, I can't take this. I knew I shouldn't have read it. I just read the part with Arthurs death in it too.

So much happened in this chapter. Can't wait to see how everyone in the empire takes the news of "Abel's death." Though I'm guessing that'll be in the next book? or maybe epilogue?
BlueWings900 chapter 65 . 8/6/2016
About damn time! Seriously! Holy crab, it took Abel ages to confess! OMG, FINALLYYYYYYY! I can't tell you how much I wanted to punch these two, Abel and Lilith! Lilith especially, she was making me so mad as I was reading DP. omg omg omg HOLLY MOTHER OF CRUSNIKS ITS ABOUT TIME!

I'm done. I think I can stop on this happy note. I don't want to know what happens next...
BlueWings900 chapter 64 . 8/6/2016
Freeze them!

That was a nice touch, having Abel burying the humans and all. Shows he still cares. I can't believe I let out a small laugh when Abel fainted at the sight of Seth though. Just the fact that he fainted was funny... I'm weird. I know.
dillydip248 chapter 66 . 8/5/2016
Oh god be can't stop crying...the raw emotion killed me
BlueWings900 chapter 63 . 7/31/2016
Ok, you're gonna hate me, I know, but why is Abel's sword called the Only One? It sounds soo English, *cough* boring *cough. (Please don't kill me)

Also loved the chapter! Kudos to Valdy, up and coming evil mastermind. I have an insane urge to hug him now while he's still good... Or maybe he's evil now that Sara is dead o.o

Ah, had this wave of nonstalgia when Abel activated his crusnik. He's always so kickazz when he activates it. Not that he's not kickazz when he doesn't... He's just even more awesome. And yes, I know 02 is evil, but I don't care. I'm having an evil marathon here, hugged Valdy, praising 02 and now I'm About to laugh along with the Joker from Batman.
Bluewing chapter 62 . 5/2/2016
That was a sweet chapter :3
indusina chapter 61 . 4/23/2016
I an SOOO glad you're posting again, I've missed this!
/Indusina
Slices chapter 62 . 4/22/2016
Get back in there you evil tear...

Lilith Able chapters always make me feel this way.

Slices out
CrystalOfTime chapter 61 . 10/11/2015
*cries* RIP, Arthur... May God grant you peace. I hope you find peace and happiness, author/authoress!
CrystalOfTime chapter 52 . 10/11/2015
Like I said. Freaking rollercoaster messing with my F***ing emotions excus my language
CrystalOfTime chapter 50 . 10/11/2015
Wow Abel you f***ing d***ass. Love the story. such a emotional rollercoaster.
my b won't work for some reason... annoying...
xcuse my language
CrystalOfTime chapter 49 . 10/11/2015
SAVE ARTHUR DON;T KILL HIM! please... I'm begging you... *starts crying and sobbing* ...
CrystalOfTime chapter 45 . 10/11/2015
Abel, you are truly a fool.
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