Reviews for A Gift
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Nice man. You're right, Kiki will never be boring. Anyway, this story is different than the rest, and it's AMAZING! Well, compared to those that aren't. Can't wait for the next one!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2017
awesome story and a bit ittelectual keep writting more fanfiction and i will read them
my name is erica by the way
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
Cute and good.
Dwarrior chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
Its just too cute.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
This was written ages ago and I don't know if you still come onto this site. But, I'd just like to say, you captured every character perfectly. I remember at one point I said to myself, 'That's is exactly was Tombo would do!' It was apparent that you knew the story very well and you're writing wasn't boring like most fanfictions that just focus on dialogue. You payed close attention to detail and were very descriptive. It's nice to find some practical writing on this site now and again and yours defiantly deserves to be recognized, even if it was a one shot. I hope you continue creative writing as a hobby and I thank you for posting your work so that I could have enjoyed it today.
Angel15Rocks chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Cute :P
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
can u write more?!
A chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Nice job!That was very enjoyable.
G chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I definitely understand Kiki's awkwardness ;p

However, while KikixTombo is cute it doesn't seem right to me. I imagine them as friends, even if they have crushes on each other at first.

Anyways. Good writing, no errors, and cute plot!'
D chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
i love kiki and tombo i wish more people wrote about them
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Awesome story