Reviews for The Rise and Fall of the Stag and the Doe |
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![]() ![]() Really enjoy reading it! Hope you continue writing! |
![]() ![]() Wait, is Sirius GAY! Also yay Sarlene romance, very nice. And why is Lily even talking to James? She went to his friend’s birthday party, is on friendly terms with his friends, and is on speaking terms with him. What happened to ‘arch-nemesis’? |
![]() ![]() I loved that you used a member of the OotP as an old friend. Sirius, well, he’s more cocky than James, and certainly more sexy. James, plain and pure, a little crazy for Lily, but that’s how he is. There are no rants about Snape though… I was expecting some, because, you know, with the whole jinxing business in Snape’s worst memory. Anyway, great job, I love it! |
![]() ![]() Oh, love the teen romance, and the big makeup, pure gold this is. And the party DRAMA, ol’ Peter getting more than his fair share of corruption, and Dorcas being so brutally honest, oh I love that about her. Peter, it’s so hard to see why he turned over to the dark side, and poor Remus, avoiding people, hating himself. But Sirius, he’s as sexy and arrogant as ever. And this whole other side to James, well, it sheds a whole new light on him. Excellent stuff! |
![]() ![]() Lily and her friends always gives me a laugh, and the Marlene-Sirius romance… well that’s just pure gold. |
![]() ![]() Oh, I just realised that maybe Sirius stared to get a little serious with Marlene after school, then she died, he was heartbroken, and put all his energy into the OotP in revenge. And the whole thing with Orion Black? Well, love the plot, he’s a strong contestant for Umbridge. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First I would like to say that I made confusion with the name , it's Heather not Hannah. And I so strongly dislike the wizardry hypocrisy And I would like to say that Dorcas and Remus , Meadopin is so adorable and cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are a so compelling writer, Lily and James standing up to Voldemort the first time is a so monumental moment in this chapter, Which will lead them battle against him later.,... and I am so sad that Hannah died... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would like to review here, to just say I so love your story so far, and I have recommended it to a friend , thank you for writing this epic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. |