Reviews for The Rise and Fall of the Stag and the Doe
Aurora chapter 17 . 11/30/2024
Really enjoy reading it! Hope you continue writing!
MS chapter 6 . 11/30/2024
Wait, is Sirius GAY! Also yay Sarlene romance, very nice. And why is Lily even talking to James? She went to his friend’s birthday party, is on friendly terms with his friends, and is on speaking terms with him. What happened to ‘arch-nemesis’?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2024
I loved that you used a member of the OotP as an old friend. Sirius, well, he’s more cocky than James, and certainly more sexy. James, plain and pure, a little crazy for Lily, but that’s how he is. There are no rants about Snape though… I was expecting some, because, you know, with the whole jinxing business in Snape’s worst memory. Anyway, great job, I love it!
MS chapter 4 . 11/29/2024
Oh, love the teen romance, and the big makeup, pure gold this is. And the party DRAMA, ol’ Peter getting more than his fair share of corruption, and Dorcas being so brutally honest, oh I love that about her. Peter, it’s so hard to see why he turned over to the dark side, and poor Remus, avoiding people, hating himself. But Sirius, he’s as sexy and arrogant as ever. And this whole other side to James, well, it sheds a whole new light on him. Excellent stuff!
MS chapter 3 . 11/29/2024
Lily and her friends always gives me a laugh, and the Marlene-Sirius romance… well that’s just pure gold.
MS chapter 2 . 11/29/2024
Oh, I just realised that maybe Sirius stared to get a little serious with Marlene after school, then she died, he was heartbroken, and put all his energy into the OotP in revenge. And the whole thing with Orion Black? Well, love the plot, he’s a strong contestant for Umbridge.
Wanderlustatheart chapter 10 . 5/11/2024
Love this!
M1I1C1K1 chapter 72 . 12/19/2023
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Guest chapter 35 . 2/23/2023
Very cute:)
Guest chapter 10 . 2/12/2023
Cute:)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2023
Great chapter!
SheremyDandelion chapter 51 . 10/25/2022
First I would like to say that I made confusion with the name , it's Heather not Hannah.
And I so strongly dislike the wizardry hypocrisy
And I would like to say that Dorcas and Remus , Meadopin is so adorable and cute
SheremyDandelion chapter 50 . 10/25/2022
You are a so compelling writer, Lily and James standing up to Voldemort the first time is a so monumental moment in this chapter, Which will lead them battle against him later.,... and I am so sad that Hannah died...
SheremyDandelion chapter 21 . 8/12/2022
I would like to review here, to just say I so love your story so far, and I have recommended it to a friend , thank you for writing this epic story!
Irisgogogo chapter 95 . 5/22/2022
I love this story.
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