Hi. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Hey. I want to say, I've read your fic a million times (okay, maybe twelve) and I'm a big fan.

I'm leaving reviews for my favourite chapters, so here I am. I've erased the Sirius Black I know from PoA, GoF and OotP after reading this! I know a lot of people don't believe in James knowing Lily was 'the one', and I probably wouldn't have either, if not for this scene. Such a beautiful, beautiful scene. Thank you for being such a wonderful writer.

Also, I realised that this fic has three couples (sort of; I sometimes tend to forget Peter and Heather, sorry), and all of them are hinted in this chapter. Was that intentional? If it was, I wonder if this is the kind of observation you always hoped a reader would make someday (I hope such things, you know)!

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Really enjoy reading it! Hope you continue writing!

Wait, is Sirius GAY! Also yay Sarlene romance, very nice. And why is Lily even talking to James? She went to his friend’s birthday party, is on friendly terms with his friends, and is on speaking terms with him. What happened to ‘arch-nemesis’?

I loved that you used a member of the OotP as an old friend. Sirius, well, he’s more cocky than James, and certainly more sexy. James, plain and pure, a little crazy for Lily, but that’s how he is. There are no rants about Snape though… I was expecting some, because, you know, with the whole jinxing business in Snape’s worst memory. Anyway, great job, I love it!

Oh, love the teen romance, and the big makeup, pure gold this is. And the party DRAMA, ol’ Peter getting more than his fair share of corruption, and Dorcas being so brutally honest, oh I love that about her. Peter, it’s so hard to see why he turned over to the dark side, and poor Remus, avoiding people, hating himself. But Sirius, he’s as sexy and arrogant as ever. And this whole other side to James, well, it sheds a whole new light on him. Excellent stuff!

Lily and her friends always gives me a laugh, and the Marlene-Sirius romance… well that’s just pure gold.

Oh, I just realised that maybe Sirius stared to get a little serious with Marlene after school, then she died, he was heartbroken, and put all his energy into the OotP in revenge. And the whole thing with Orion Black? Well, love the plot, he’s a strong contestant for Umbridge.

Love this!

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Very cute:)

Cute:)

Great chapter!

First I would like to say that I made confusion with the name , it's Heather not Hannah.
And I so strongly dislike the wizardry hypocrisy
And I would like to say that Dorcas and Remus , Meadopin is so adorable and cute