This was so incredible! I loved that she didn't completely give in right away and that she was fighting with herself, it made it so much more believable. And I really loved your Hook, he seems so in character with the way her presented himself.
And of course the saucy parts very divine! Loved every second of this fic ️

first and foremost, I gotta say that this fanfic has been my ever unforgettable story that I've held close for more than a decade already. This has been one of first ever fanfics I've read, before that I didn't even know much about fandoms until my penpal told me about fandoms (my first was sherlock bbc). She recommended me some fics, and I couldn't stop reading more and more of them, of other fandoms too. then I got to watch peter pan (2003) after seeing it from my childhood, and I didn't realized my crush to hook was so big even as a kid. then I found this gem, and I swear it was the first ever I got to improve my english and vocabulary as a whole (english is my second language), introduced me to florence the machine and fleetwood mac (I couldn't thank you enough for this!), couldn't even stop reading this fic in one sitting, until i've reached the time when it was chapter 7 and apparently you didn't updated to more fics yet for some time, and I thought "nooo don't stop updating! i hope you updated the story soon!" and I kinda read other fics but somehow forgot to read back this one. then years later, I lost touch to go to , but I always got this fic in my mind a lot because it sticks to my mind how poetic it is, my whole concept of romance shaped to how the dynamic of this story, making me wanna read it again after years. then when i went to , I couldn't find it, and realizing got changed after years and apparently people been migrating to ao3 or even wattpad, so I got so scared that I couldn't find this fic at all after a decade. I searched at ao3, couldn't found it. but now i finally found it, and even after a decade, I've been waiting to say this since; I love your work so much that it stuck to my brain for 10 years and more. this ship is beautiful but you made it as if they were an original gothic love story made in Victorian era and immortalized as a popular book and adapted as musicals like phantom of the opera. thank you so much for writing this and I am so glad I found this fic again and find that it has been updated to complete! I feel so silly writing this comment because it's so long i thought i bore you but it's just because this fic meant so much to me have a good day or night!

Wonderful read! Thank you!

I have no words to express my love for your writing and this story!
I have long yearned for something so intense with James Hook, especially with Wendy, and you have splendidly fulfilled that wish.
please dear do more related to this couple or at least James Hook. I couldn't help but relate his character to the Hook played by Jason Isaacs who in my opinion was not only wonderful but very sexy as a bonus and a perfect example of what a Deep Man can awaken.

I'm already asking too much hahahaha but I really wish I had a writing like yours about Severus Snape.

Great Story! wonderful language and character development

Could never remember if I ever saved this or not

Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing!

Wow! This was such a beautiful fanfic!

Wow just wow , deadass I think this might be the best thing I’ve ever read. I’m in awe with your writing, you are so incredibly talented I’m jealous. Girl you seriously need to consider writing your own publicised story and have the world witness such writing.

I still have to say...I really adore this story...it was so fun to read and I hope one day you write more like this...maybe even with there own child's running around and driving the ship and crew to become crazy -

I know it has been many year since you first wrote this and this is the first Pan fanfic I have read having loved the movie with Jeremy when I was young. This is perhaps my most favorite fanfic. I want to thank you deeply for this, there have been my own regrets in my childhood, a past that I needed to leave behind. I have found my soulmate and I know what a depth and wonder our love it can be, both in its beauty and fear. This healed me in a way I didn’t think I could be, it allowed me to look deep within myself and come the realization that some memories are better left behind in childhood memories, forgotten. Thank you. I feel like I can sail now as well.

Thank you for being able to write the story we both needed to be written! I'm finding myself breathless at least as often as Wendy!

The history, the scenery, the passion. What’s not to love about Wendy and James?

This is easily my favorite Wendy/Hook fanfictions ever, and I've read many. It's the heavy enemies to lovers vibe that is so apparent, and makes me love it more because many fail to show just the capacity of villainy that the Captain is capable of. Also Wendy's plight about the roles of women during her time that weigh on her. It makes their coming together all that much more sweeter due to all the angst and stubbornness between the two. Bravo!

I am so sorry for not having reviewed the previous chapters, but hear me out, will you? I simply could not relinquish the hold I had on this story, as it resonated deep within the soul. It was everything I had hoped to write on a newly bought parchment, but closed the leather bind of the book, fearing discovery. It seems your story reflects the lives some women still lead, their sexual weaknesses harboring strength over their iron wills and desire for life. I believe I have to declare this: Every person who had ever been in love goes through the conflicting emotions Wendy and James went through. I also believe this very conflict strengthens them as a threat, or a force to reckon with. Thank you, dear author, for making me believe in love once more. I really felt the power of words, the tension taut between their heartstrings, and when they kiss, I felt the phantom touches of a love unexplored yet. This is how I envisioned the journey going through the roller coaster ride of something beyond love, the state of being one, feeling everything yet artfully ignoring the bitter tastes of life with a profuse indifference. Great story, a masterful craft of words. I feel like I cannot thank you enough for the time you dedicated for the completion of this wonderful piece.
Love, Hawwa.