Awww, I felt like crying too :/ But anyways, the story was really, really beautiful. I loved every part of it :)

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Even though I'm not a fan of Dumbledore/Grindelwald, I like slash so I think this was story was quite good!

I liked the way you narrated the story as a flashback showing their relationship. It was really sweet the way Grindelwald was late, but Dumbledore actually didn't mind. The way Dumbledore broke down in the end was heartbreaking. I don't think I've ever read anyone showing a weak side of Dumbledore, which I think was admirable on your part.

I also liked the way you incorporated the prompt, with mentions of the breeze in the flashback and Dumbledore remembering it after coming out of the pensive. I could spot a few grammatical errors here and there, but not many. So, overall, a sweet and touching story. Good job!