Reviews for Mr Monotony
Bottled Up chapter 7 . 2/25/2013
You break my heart so much, and yet I'm excited for more!
James Birdsong chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
Kingprochan chapter 7 . 2/21/2013
Wow...Just read all seven chapters today, without taking a break, and my mind is blown. This is really good! x3 Please, update, update, UPDATE!
yess91 chapter 7 . 2/20/2013
this is really good, i can't decide which story i want to read more of, i want to know what happened with watanuki, also with domeki, but this xing ark is good too. i suggest you put some sort of break if your going to switch characters stories, confused me a bit there when we started with watanuki's past then switched to xing and fei wong's past. also i don't remember the clerk telling her his name, or of a way she could have learned his name. other then that this is an amazing story
Bottled up chapter 6 . 1/6/2013
Wow, only 3 parts left? I can't wait for them then!
Honey Fujioka chapter 6 . 12/18/2012
Waits impatiently for the next installment, because this story is absolutely marvellous, and I was hooked by the end of chapter 1!
yess91 chapter 6 . 12/4/2012
this is an amazing story, i'm really enjoyingit, can't wait to see what you have planned
impurepet chapter 6 . 11/15/2012
i guess we'll just have to stick around cuz this monster here is addictive, even if i can't really tell anymore whats going on. but you just focus on making it all play out so put the next one up soon and, hopefully, more things will make sense
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 11/15/2012
Good update
EchizenRyomaLover chapter 6 . 11/15/2012
I admit I was really tired when I was reading this (because school work is just horrible that way), so I did get a little confused. Still, this is an amazing, AU-ish insight to Xing Huo, especially since we never really knew her in the Tsubasa series. Anyway, I still can't wait for the DouWata action, and I'm very happy to know that it's coming soon! Despite the fairly complicated narration, this chapter was written very well (my only slight problem was that sometimes the transitions were a bit sudden; or maybe my brain was just too tired to process things...) and I knew right from the start that this was going to be a big part of the plot. XDD

Hope you update again real soon!
bottled up chapter 5 . 11/2/2012
Ahh! You updated! I'm so happy, this fanfic has got me hooked and has stayed like that, I'm glad you're still working on this. You're doing a wonderful job (although I think in chapter 3 when sakura presses her breasts against his chest it says "he pressed his breasts" instead of "she") and I can't wait for the next chapter. (I also like the way you go behind everyones past and background) keep doing what you do.
impurepet chapter 5 . 10/30/2012
nice cliff-hanger. i know your chapters are long and it probably takes ages to write them properly, but please update soon. you are writing here one of the most interesting douwata fanfic i've ever read so... good luck !
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