|Reviews for Enchaining|
| Shadeofblue chapter 6 . 10/7/2013
It pains me to know that this fic hasn't been updated for almost a year. I just came across this fic today and spent a few hours reading the whole thing, including the prequel. I love this very much. I love how in character everyone is. Every chapter has me at the edge of my seat wondering what's gonna happen next. I fear for Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. Of Kushina's reaction and whether they will be separated again. And there's Sai. I really worry about that creep. I can only hope that Sasuke would be able to prevent Sai for hurting Naruto, seeing that Sai is most likely planning to rape Naruto when the opportunity presents itself. The last chapter is such a cliffhanger. I really hope you'll update this soon.
| mudshake chapter 6 . 3/5/2013
awww..i need more updates.
the tension is killing me.
nice story and keep up the good work.
| bridmatt chapter 6 . 11/20/2012
This is really entertaining. I like that you are keeping things moving in the fic. A lot of things have happened, but it doesn't feel rushed. The pacing feels just right. I think a lot of fic writers get bogged down in too much introspection or needless dialogue. (The kind of stuff most readers skim anyway.) You don't have too much of either one, so I end up reading your whole chapter instead of getting bored and skimming just to make it to the end.
I also like the plot twists and turns. Neji's betrayal was an unexpected way for Kushina and Ino to find out what was going on. And I liked that it was Sakura who caught them in the morning. It underscored the fact that Naruto had to tell his mother, and also didn't let him off the hook from having that conversation with her. I realized since he didn't get the chance to have it the first time around, it was important to me as a reader that he have it this time. I didn't want it to be taken out of his hands a second time. I think it showed Naruto's increasing maturity that he could do it this time and stand up for himself and Sasuke. At 16 when he had stuff to feel guilty about and was shocked by the whole situation, at being found out, at his mother's anger, and at being pulled out of school, Naruto giving Kushina the silent treatment was all he could really do. But now that he's practically an adult and ready to be on his own (he's already sort of been on his own living in the dorms at his boarding school), Naruto can assert himself more now.
I hope eventually with time, Kushina will be able to forgive Sasuke. Not only for Naruto's sake, but also because Sasuke doesn't quite deserve all the hate he's getting. He suffered a lot because of what happened with Naruto, and despite Kushina thinking he's a slut, he was actually faithful to Naruto for the past two years. He did use Ino as his beard (something he was kind of forced into doing because of his parents), but Sasuke never slept with her, and he never promised they'd get married. And they weren't together all that long anyway. The mistake was in cheating on Ino with Naruto, which is a lot to be angry with him for, I know... But the complicated role the parents play in this fic is one of its more interesting aspects, so I wouldn't want her to suddenly become a rainbow flag waving, 100% supportive ball of awesomeness. I like the fact that she's basically a good person who has her flaws and made some mistakes while trying to do (what she thinks is) the right thing.
My only little quibble with the fic is that I hope the Sai situation doesn't hijack the fic and end up taking over the plot (which it could, since Sai seems like a nutcase). I like the direction the story has been going in all along. I like the fact that the fic has largely been about the social and personal consequences of an affair. Most stories seem to skip all that for the sake of a happy ending, but I really like seeing Naruto and Sasuke deal with those consequences and fight to overcome them. (I think by the end of the fic, they'll have really earned their happy ending.)
It's interesting seeing Sasuke go from Mr. Popular to the guy who gets whispered about, and for Chouji to now be slightly uncomfortable around him. I'm curious how everyone will react once Naruto becomes a more regular part of his life. And Naruto will probably have to have the same kind of uncomfortable conversation with Kiba that he had with Sakura. I'm curious how that will go as well. It's one thing for Sakura not to know about Sasuke (Naruto simply never told her why he ended up at boarding school), but another thing for Kiba not to know. (I'm assuming Naruto lied to him about why he suddenly got pulled out of school, and Naruto even used him as a cover for going to see Sasuke...) And hopefully Naruto, Sasuke, and Ino will eventually get the chance to make peace with one another and get closure. They all behaved badly, so hopefully they can all just admit it to each other and find a way to move on.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
| siarafaerie-101-miss chapter 6 . 11/16/2012
OMG THIS IS SOSOSOSOSOSO FRIGGEN BRILLIANT! please update again soon! :D:D:D
| SaSuNaRuFoReVeR chapter 6 . 11/15/2012
Love, love, love it. The interactins with Naru and Sasu is incredible. Saku sounds kinda slutty, but she's still a good friend. I like how you dont bash her like alot of authors do. And poor sai! He's had a hard life and Danzos such an ass.! keep up the good work
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/15/2012
Wow. No wonder Sais crazy lol.
| iceechica chapter 6 . 11/14/2012
Awesome awesome awesome awesome! I have been waiting for this chapter for ever and it was so awesome and ease update soon cuz I wanna read the beautiful yaoi drama
| pyscopyromaniac chapter 6 . 11/14/2012
Awesome chapter :D Can't wait to read what happens when Naruto and Sasuke go to see Kushina :)
| FanofBellaandEdward chapter 6 . 11/14/2012
Alright, Sai is creepy O_O
And I feel sorry for Naruto - having to deal with his mum can't be easy now. Though I hope it works out between the two of them - I have a feeling that the thing with Sai won't go away easily.
Again a fantastic chapter At first I thought of leaving it for tomorrow as I'm supposed to go to sleep now, but I couldn't resist and had to read it ;
Looking forward to the next one!
| iceechica chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
OMG! This chapter was awesome! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soone 3
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/5/2012
I NEED more plz!
| Aiko Tachibana chapter 5 . 10/4/2012
Cant wait for more
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
I wonder who caught them? I hope it wasn't Kushina
| kit-lelouch ai chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!D: WHY DO YOU TORTURE ME! D: TTTT i hate cliffhangers*sniff* please update again soon
| SophiaTheMad chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
The whole time Naruto and Sasuke were together I just kept thinking; Kushina's so gonna pop out and bust them any moment know. But now I'm confused cause I'm not sure if the girl at the end was her or not. Maybe they got lucky and Sakura caught them instead. I don't know but whatever, UPDATE SOON!