Reviews for Draco's hidden secrets
woolyjumpers chapter 1 . 9/30
your writing is difficult to read due to grammar, its hard to continue what I'm sure would be good!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2013
Please fix the spelling issues. It's very distracting. Great story tho. Keep up the good work
anon chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
Your spelling and Grammar is atrocious, and it reflects on youD half baked story, learn before you upload another chapter because this is ridiculous and kind of pathetic.
Belldandy55555 chapter 28 . 8/16/2013
so the babies have potter blood in them...
after all the body was made by wormtail, and tom sr and the blood by harry so yeah great idea.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
Your plot seems interesting, but honestly go get open office or Microsoft office or something and run this through a grammar and spell checker. Even most smart phones have auto correct for spelling at least. I can't even bother to read this as interesting as it looks.
Guest chapter 26 . 6/21/2013
oh my when it rains it pours
Belldandy55555 chapter 26 . 5/25/2013
it is cruel to keep sirius alive only to kill him in a stupid combat!
Voldy is so cruel to his unborn children, to think he will let die the mother of his heirs and let them died themself! He is worst than his own father because his father was misled, here he raped so he is the responsable participant!
I was happy to see I was right about ginny, the bitch it wasn t even the child of dean! With how many did she slept? even if it was rape she lied to everyone and was so mean to draco, it is karma...
I didn t see coming the treason of draco sister, how could she does that to her brother? she knew everything she helps voldy she is worst than her father
Jacobdraco chapter 26 . 5/24/2013
i love it
Belldandy55555 chapter 25 . 4/5/2013
I think it is not the right chap...
Jacobdraco chapter 25 . 4/1/2013
I love it please update
kandikami chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
This story seems good. Its just a little hard to read
Agent L chapter 24 . 3/11/2013
Uh oh...
Jacobdraco chapter 24 . 3/11/2013
I love it please update
MMWillow13 chapter 23 . 2/28/2013
I still say Ginny's kid isn't Harry's
Belldandy55555 chapter 23 . 2/18/2013
I was surprised dean wasn't present for the scan of the baby and harry didn't say anything about this (ginny we understand, she wants harry to be the father... even if I think and hope he is not - too many complication and the date don't match). When draco says it can be another, I think it can be right because of ginny reaction (she hasn't denied this). And the answer can be easy, they have to know when the child will be born (they saw the scan so his grow), the rest is only a bit of math.
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