Reviews for Draco's hidden secrets
Weekend101 chapter 13 . 6/12
Why did you have to add Sophie? I don't think it was necessary.
Ronelia Delgrange chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
I would be willing to beta your story if you are still looking. Feel free to contact me through email. This story has a lot of potential. :)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/26/2016
What is this ? English or gobbledegook! Can't take it anymore! We're all serious readers here, at least have d decency to put a sincere effort in writing!
Gloriejo chapter 3 . 12/4/2015
Great story. A lot of grammar mistakes though. I am going to guess that English is not your first language. Anyway, It is good so far so I am going to keep reading.
woolyjumpers chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
your writing is difficult to read due to grammar, its hard to continue what I'm sure would be good!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2013
Please fix the spelling issues. It's very distracting. Great story tho. Keep up the good work
anon chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
Your spelling and Grammar is atrocious, and it reflects on youD half baked story, learn before you upload another chapter because this is ridiculous and kind of pathetic.
Belldandy55555 chapter 28 . 8/16/2013
so the babies have potter blood in them...
after all the body was made by wormtail, and tom sr and the blood by harry so yeah great idea.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
Your plot seems interesting, but honestly go get open office or Microsoft office or something and run this through a grammar and spell checker. Even most smart phones have auto correct for spelling at least. I can't even bother to read this as interesting as it looks.
Guest chapter 26 . 6/21/2013
oh my when it rains it pours
Belldandy55555 chapter 26 . 5/25/2013
it is cruel to keep sirius alive only to kill him in a stupid combat!
Voldy is so cruel to his unborn children, to think he will let die the mother of his heirs and let them died themself! He is worst than his own father because his father was misled, here he raped so he is the responsable participant!
I was happy to see I was right about ginny, the bitch it wasn t even the child of dean! With how many did she slept? even if it was rape she lied to everyone and was so mean to draco, it is karma...
I didn t see coming the treason of draco sister, how could she does that to her brother? she knew everything she helps voldy she is worst than her father
Jacobdraco chapter 26 . 5/24/2013
i love it
Belldandy55555 chapter 25 . 4/5/2013
I think it is not the right chap...
Jacobdraco chapter 25 . 4/1/2013
I love it please update
kandikami chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
This story seems good. Its just a little hard to read
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