|Reviews for The dawn of a new adventure|
| Luckenhaft chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I can't take it anymore! GET A BETA YOUR STORY NEEDS ONE! there are so many grammatical mistakes that it is driving me nuts!
| Greywing44 chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Good chapter...my oc could beat yours though(Smirk)good humor too and good keeping them in charecter
| The Old Master Known as Curtis chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
SO far i'm loving what I did with the two new characters what do you guys think?