|Reviews for Farewell to a Friend|
| MLaw chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Timely and emotional. Are you going to reveal who this person is ? It would make an interesting follow up in another story. Glad you fixed the problems with this.
| alynwa chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This is lovely but, please correct this sentences: Sir, it IS time to go, I AM sorry for your LOSS. (corrections in caps)
No, gentlemen, do NOT be sorry for him or me.