Reviews for The Serpentine Subterfuge
Piletorn chapter 14 . 7/6
Thank you for writing this. It was another great read
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5
i love this series but rereading it in 2023... god i hope the AO3 rewrite gets rid of the implications that SEVENTEEN year old leo like harry when she's ELEVEN jesus christ
newdog14 chapter 1 . 7/3
oh my goodness so many new things!

so, firstly, so awesome to see the evolution of the ruse! back up plans are fantastic.

Secondly, I do NOT trust Leo. He just has a bad vibe to me, though I can't quite pinpoint why.

Riddle is terrifying and it scares me that Rigel was so reckless while interacting with him. O.O

Rigel, baby, you do not refuse a life debt from two members of the Wizenmagot. Those are exactly the sort of people you need on your side in order to keep legislation like the marriage law from passing.
Amaya130 chapter 10 . 6/18
omg i can't "you're happiness sickens me", that is so funny lol
Amaya130 chapter 4 . 6/18
wait! i forgot about this section, but won't this be difficult for Archie when they switch back with all those people knowing about him knowing parseltongue? Harry!
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 3 . 3/10
She’s totally pregnant
BerserkLittleCook chapter 14 . 3/9
I don't know if you meant it to be so, but I hate Rosier with a deep passion, he disgusts me and I want him to dissappear and soon as possible. If I were Rigel's magic, he'd be a postcard adressed to Australia and his shoes would be an owl ready to take off.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/8
Please no romance for a few more years...
BerserkLittleCook chapter 14 . 3/8
I'd change the "greater good" to "common good". It works better in that context and doesn't trigger Dumble-bashing PTSD a lot of the fandom suffers from. Unless it was your intention to foreshadow something, in which case my point is void.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/8
Thanks for the reasoning V. Keep up the great story. Loving it
Guest chapter 2 . 3/6
Good start! Loving the world building
aki93 chapter 3 . 2/5
Hey there, I just noticed a mistake in this sentence: Rigel just discovered that Thresals exist and is asked "Do you volunteer at St Mungo with your surrogate uncle?" When it should be "with your father" since they are referring to Sirius
Hope that was helpful
Guest chapter 12 . 1/29
Same person; same topic, once again, Harry: my autistic pov, you are so obvious. And hello esteemed author hopefully reading this, it must be deliberate, like, there is too many coincidences that Harry is accidentally autistic, don’t get me wrong, I love it! and I love that you decided to do it! It’s so rare to see a character so obviously autistic that is actually a real person and not either accidentally autistic or just a stereotype so you can say there was a neurodivergent person in the story so you can tick that off the list. So thank you, for your decisions, and this amazing story, have a great day! :D
Guest chapter 7 . 1/28
Same person as before; same topic, do you realise how difficult it is to not comment every time I see something, because I swear I could do a raads-r for Harry and score high; like, she’s so autistic, and I love that! And before I forget, absolutely love this whole series!
Guest chapter 14 . 12/29/2022
"That makes one of us" Uuuugh my heart! It's so painful owowowowow :(
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