|Reviews for The Serpentine Subterfuge|
| AAA chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Hahaha! I loved how Rigel was apparently the most suspicious person at Riddle's gala! And the interaction between Rigel and Caelum Lestrange was an interesting twist. Will he be the one to accidentally uncover her secret? It was interesting to watch Rigel's friends try and put the pieces together.
It occurred to me a while back that Rigel was learning French in order to support her "foreigner" background in case it was discovered that "Rigel Black" does not exist. Will her French come into play during the Triwizard Tournament? Will you even have a Triwizard Tournament?
Anyway, loved the chapter and update soon :)
| flakeshake07 chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
! another amazing chapter. i think this story is fantastic and i absolutely loved the scene on the balcony!:) cant wait to see how the rest of the school year is going to pan out! Eagerly awaiting your next chapter...
| Mayjude chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Hi, in my previous review I forgot to ask a question: since there was no war, Molly's brothers Fabian and Gideon Prewett should still be alive, will they make an appearance?
By the way, great chapter as always!
| avidly reading chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Thank you for the update! Looking forward to future chapters. For a moment there, I was afraid that you were going on hiatus. Happy holidays! :)
P.S. I read the Alanna the Lioness series because of this story. Thanks for the inspiration!
| zeichnerinaga chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
lol. i love this ending. and will it be very difficult for rigel to hide her menstruation? mine always lasts a whole week and hurts horrible the first one or two days. how will she be able to hide it? in the end they will think she is some kind of werwolf or something ;D
i love this chapter, please update soon.
| Debate4life chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Awesome chapter, good as ever. I like how the plot builds towards a crescendo...very well done.
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
draco POV was great, and I really like how Harry's friends try to puzzle out what's going on with her, but I still hope they won't figure out her secret yet. As do many other people, if I read the reviews right. It's too fascinating to watch all of this unfold and all the secrets and everything. Rook and Aldon are awesome! I hope Harry becomes friends with them both, though Rook and his exasperated and intelligent and mountain-y way of being makes me want more of him especially.
Really like how you had Harry taking care of her period in a typically pragmatic manner, mostly just sort of annoyed with herself that she'd forgotten about it lol :D Hope the next chapter is out soon, because your story is just too awesome!
| Arcticstar chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Great chapter. She still makes potions for Krait during the year right? Will she find time for that? And what will happen with the basilisk this time? I actually like the basilisk when it is sane. Update soon. I await the interesting climax.
| Not-A-Spy chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Enthralling as usual.
| leylinjan chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Thanks so much! I loved the Draco POV for a change - that's new and was really good. I wonder what Aldon's agenda is... Thank you so so much for the update - I love your story!
| dizzy chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
more funny misunderstandings in this chapter XD i like rookwood and aldon. but i feel sorry for rigel who had to listen to bella sexing up her husband. and her horrible son, urgh! insulting remus and lily and james like that! i'm happy that rigel lashed out at him.
more snape and rigel for the people XD i do love me some snarky snape. "Your happiness sickens me." LOL.
| Frecklefreak chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
ZOMG! Words cannot describe how much I love you! This came at such a great time because I've been having such a bad day; I have a headache and someone out bid me on ebay for something that I realllly wanted! So this was the perfect pick me up!
I love all that is Rosier and Rockwood times by a billion all the gala interaction was pure gold! That's without even bringing up the confrontation between Lestrange...honestly I've been waiting for the snide comments to start and you didn't disappoint! Also Bella asking how to get rid of him to, was just so harsh and so her :) I feel that Aldon and Rigel have took the step from becoming close to becoming friends and I really like the transition and that the older Slytherins were offended on her behalf as well.
I see that things are progressing with Draco, how he's paying more attention to her looks etc (also love how you slipped in the best friend with a girl comment, very sly :D) he himself probably doesn't even realize where it's leading right now! Also the friends are starting to click on to all the differences uh oh! But Blaise reading his mail is just cute as :)
All in all a surberbly fantasic chapter all round, and I don't know why some people are so worried about the direction the story is going in and if you can pull it off, yeah I like coming up with theories on what will happen but I know they will always pale in comparison to the real thing - and frankly you could suddenly transport the whole story to take place on Mars and still pull it off, so don't be to worried with what people suggest :) Thanks again, pretty pretty please another fast update like this one I still feel sad about ebay!
| Vaughn Tyler chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
| hentai18ancilla chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
They are getting closer to discover her secret. Also, if she already had her first period then her breasts will have started growing out too. I wonder how her male friends will react to such discovery? Snape?
| ryo chapter 9 . 1/9/2013
You're so amazing, its unbelievable. I've only very rarely read fanfiction written so well - I've only seen one other writer so far with as intriguing ideas as you!
The dynamics of the relationship between Mr and Mrs. Hurst (and Leo) are very amusing. You should write a scene in which they have dinner together - I can just imagine the conversations they'd have, especially after Harry starts her internship!