|Reviews for Child of Darkness|
| Amu4ever chapter 5 . 5/19
So, mistakes I noticed:
- You keep confusing present perfect with present tense.
- "What's the winner get" is probably suppused to mean something along the lines of: "What will the winner get?"
- You have many unfinished sentences in there. Especially after people talk. "'We will see about that', walking in after his date" is a good example for this.
You probably meant "'We will see about that', he said before he walked in after his date" or "'We will see about that', he said smirking while walking into the casino after his date.
| DarkButterflyQueen chapter 23 . 5/1
Please update its already been a year I want to know what happens next please
| Krusher chapter 23 . 4/22
Please update as soon as you can.
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/14
Please update i cant im shaking omg please update soon
| issynip1 chapter 23 . 4/14
I cant wait to read the rest!
| LOST IN DREAMSxX chapter 7 . 4/6
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS PERFECTION! THE ANGEL AND DEMON THING WAS ADURABLEEEEEEEEEEE I WANTED TO CRY! AMAZING WORK ON THIS CHAPTER!
| im ur misconception chapter 23 . 3/19
Ok so I have had few authors point me at this Zercy, LL4E is the big one as she is my beta, friend and mindful angel that keeps me motivated to keep writing, if I don't post what I am writing.. LOLS! 3 new chapters for CVDS and Silver Memories etc... yeah...
But this is a very stimulating story, fairly easy to follow, with crack pairings galore. I am putting you on all four stalker list that we can here on this site. I hope that you are able to keep up with this story as it is truly a gem. An that is all for me, as I have work in a few hours and need some sleep... Your story was that good..
Now in your words... Im out!
| Crowned Clown X chapter 23 . 3/6
I can't remember if it was this chapter or the last one, but it's runes and not ruins. Just wanted to let you know. Other than that, I have no qualms with what's going on. I'm more curious about how Laxus and Wendy will develop instead of the other two, but that's probably because it's not a very common story. I kinda wished the relationship between Elfman and Bickslow had had a larger focus, but since it would just seem kinda random I understand why it wasn't.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Mystery Otaku G chapter 23 . 2/28
I really like your story it is really good XD
| Deesha-chan chapter 23 . 2/1
Cant wait for thw next chapter...
You really can make new pairs hreat... : D
Cheers Deesha :)
| Miss ART chapter 23 . 1/24
I have just finished reading... And I have to say Iove the plot its different from the many other stories I've read and I'm looking forward to reading more... Waiting patiently for ur next up date :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/18
Not sure if u know but 10 jewels equal 1 us dollar
| allanimefreak73754 chapter 19 . 12/31/2014
all da crack pairings
you get a crack pairing you get a crack pairing EVERYONE GETS A CRACK PAIRING
| VanillaMilkshake18 chapter 17 . 12/11/2014
His punishment is fine the way it is. He jeopardized a guild member's life. Now, Zeref on the other hand... *cracks knuckles menacingly* He obviously doesn't seem to care for Lucy, saying that if the BABY was lost he'd kill Natsu. There's also the plan...
| VanillaMilkshake18 chapter 16 . 12/11/2014
I'm starting to think that Zeref has genuine feelings towards Lucy. But that threatening could be because they might never have sex again, and he would lose the chance for an heir.