|Reviews for Episode 3|
| Ted Danson chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
then gorden GO AWAY AND NEVER COME BACK YOU ARE TERRIBLE AT WRITING
| The Awes0me 0ne chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
All I have to say, is that I was so distracted by the terrible grammar that I couldn't enjoy or even really make and sense of what I was reading, the better your grammar is the more likely someone is to read it, you should really be careful... Not really flames, just constructive criticism.
I like your idea but, for one, Gordon doesn't talk, he's a mute, just like most/all half-life related valve games, and two, you need to describe situations MUCH more thoroughly, for example, I would have had the first chapter dealing with how, where, and why gordon wakes up, and how alyc is dealing with her fathers death, it felt like I was
skimming through a summary of a book...