|Reviews for Finding My Father|
| RileyKaye chapter 8 . 8/11/2013
Im writing something similar at the moment between Joker and Mona ! :D I think you could write Hannah's thoughts and feelings more. All you write is the talking, sorry. Im loving dis story and I think it would be better for all of your stories if you wrote a little more on the thoughts and feelings so we can really understand the character more. :) I love Pretty Little Liars and Joker. :)
This isn't a flame! I really hope this helps!
| brandon barclay chapter 13 . 12/11/2012
| Kayla Queen chapter 13 . 9/16/2012
Luv it Srry I didn't login
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
This is my favorite movie and one of my favorite shows(: Very interesting topic!