|Reviews for Coming Home|
| jackalgirl chapter 4 . 7/8/2014
Why did you capitalize the word toga in the tic itself? Sorry, all that grammar stuff bugs me
| jackalgirl chapter 3 . 7/8/2014
Why German? By the way, if you do answer, PM me at Kawaii On'nanoko. I'm just too lazy to login.
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/16/2014
Our language is, by far, the most ugly language ever! I would much prefer to speak French or German all day, they are so much more melodic.
| Mystera II chapter 8 . 4/23/2014
Congratulations! I think this is the first story in which the german parts aren't all ... wonky!
Nice! Very nice!
| Loliloster chapter 2 . 4/5/2014
Understood half of what Danny said! I feel accomplished!
| greenwings33 chapter 8 . 3/14/2014
| Jess-love95 chapter 8 . 1/17/2014
It was great ! Really, I love the dynamics between Octavian and Percy, you write so well !
| Jess-love95 chapter 4 . 1/17/2014
Wow, what Percy said in german is pretty hot, too bad Octavian thinks it's a muffin recipe XD
| Jess-love95 chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
Oh Octavian is so adorable ! And Danny and Percy are cute )
| Jess-love95 chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Oh no ! He lost the baby :'( This is so sad, but at least he has Danny (so cuuuuute) and soon Octavian D
| Himeko3809 chapter 7 . 1/12/2014
Never call a pregnant woman, or man in Percy's case, "fat" or any other comment... They're dangerous during this stage... Mood-swings, morning-sickness, etc. Beware, future-daddies!
| Himeko3809 chapter 4 . 1/12/2014
If Octavian he'd understood what Percy had said, he would die from major nosebleeds... Hahahahaha!
*:.｡. o()o .｡.:*
| LumenDeMorte chapter 8 . 1/9/2014
I liked im ean who doesnt like smut but you need some sweets and flufiness to
| Lavonya chapter 3 . 1/5/2014
| Lavonya chapter 2 . 1/5/2014
You slipped... and Percy almost caught you... heeeeeheeeeeheeeeheeeeheee...