Reviews for Mist
Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Nice. Please use less swearwords, or darn and heck and similar things.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Uhh, little boring.
TackAttack chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
This was interesting. I liked the idea, and the execution was good. This is a freewritten poem, right? If it is, I think you should add more italics, bolds, et cetera. Keep writing!
Huinari chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
That was fun to read. And it gives Piper more of a personality, I think. Fantastic job!

medella chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
That was...very angsty and intense. I can almost imagine Piper being like that. Good job.
Lucky ducky chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This is very good! Keep it up :)
Sylvanna chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I'm gonna say something simple...

I like this.
IamNyssaDaughterofHephaestus chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Piper shouldn't hate the mist. It didn't do this intentionally. Hera made the mist do it. She should hate Hera. Good portrayal.