Reviews for The Son of Lord Voldemort
stxlla chapter 24 . 1/6
First of all, the plot is amazing. So many times I have started stories that in theory would be great, but once I start reading them I discover that they are rather lacking. Secondly, I am so so impressed by the way you have managed to structure the characters. You developed characters in a way that preserved the original character while still allowed them to fit the story correctly. For these things, and many many more aspects that I could not fit into the review, I applaud you!
CaptainBLT chapter 24 . 1/6
Since you asked for some feedback, let me say that what I think this story needs is a clear threat to Harrison and his family. It feels kind of like a david vs. goliath fight and I don't see why the deatheaters are not yet victorious. Look at it this way: compared to canon, the death eaters have greater numbers, no one in azkaban, harrison training to be a badass with his hordes of friends and the order ministry has fewer forces and no harry. So I think that the story would benefit from a objective that is not easily stomped on. Love the story so far though.
Samantha Winters chapter 24 . 1/6
I can't tell you enough words to begin to describe this story. This is a story I've been wanting to read all my life. I love how there is so much detail, that I can get a vived picture in my mind. I love how there is so much emotion coming from the characters, with the exception of Tom and Harrison. I love the fact that most of the characters are different then the ones in the books and movies. I love every single bit of this story and this is just a few things that I'm barely able to describe because of the magnitude of this story. But, I do wish to see more actions involving Harrison. I'm one to usually crave characters getting hurt. I don't know why but it's just part of me to read people getting hurt. But, I want to read how Harrison gets hurt and a like Death Eater brings an unconscious Harrison and I just want to read the emotion that's too come to Tom. That's one of the things I would love to see in this story. But, I really like it, I'm going to fav the author and the story and get mail if a new story or chapter come out.
P.S can't wait for the next chapter
Master of Dragons God chapter 24 . 1/6
Good chapter
BookGirl465 chapter 24 . 1/6
I really like the way you portrayed the characters. If they actually had grown up this way, or were treated this way in school, this is exactly how I would picture them. Well done.
Sanna Black Slytherin chapter 24 . 1/6
I know this will sound terrible and twisted and seven kinds of bizarre, but I hope Tonks will end up pregnant with Rabastian's child and actually decide to keep it. It would make sense in this story, in some horribly twisted sort of way.

Obviously Harrison speaks Bulgarian. Why am I not surprised? *sigh* (This is not a complaint. As silly as I feel for writing this parenthesis out, I feel the need to emphasize this point.)

'Young Lord'? Does that mean Oblansk is a Death Eater? When did we see him last in this story? Also, Oblansk isn't a very Bulgarian last name.

How did the twins and Percy not react to the Veela? And Mr. Weasley?

Did Harrison know what exactly was going to happen or did he just know that something was going to happen? Sorry, I'm just a perfectionist and I'm stuck on details like that.

Okay, so I'm reading a few stories with similar plots at the same time. My question is: who is part of Harrison's group of friends? Are the twins a part of it? Is Sirius? Percy? (I'm confusing this story with 'The Rise of a Dark Lord' and I apologize profusely for that, but I've been mixing those two stories up lately.)

So, will we get to see who put up the Dark Mark in the sky in the next chapter? And what about Harrison's Ron's points of view?
Lills chapter 24 . 1/6
Awesome story - keep going - ooh maybe make a irratating Sudan too?! Xxx harry Daphne
The Malfoy Family chapter 24 . 1/6
This story is just amazing it's not like a normal dark harry story is must be vet complex but amazing at the same time I keep on reading it over and over and over again pls write more
ryandark chapter 24 . 1/6
Thank you for the new chapter and for continuing this tale despite the negativity of some people. Those folks who criticise people to make themselves feel better are not worth listening to; I'd like to thank you for your perseverance in your art. You are an inspiration to all aspiring writers on this site.

As to the chapter/story's direction, I am quite enthralled. I have no wish to influence the outcome of your tale and can only hope it stays as original as it was in your first envisioning. No matter what happens next, you have my word I will follow until your conclusion.
PrewalShadeX chapter 24 . 1/6
Awesome! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 24 . 1/6
This is quite possibly the greatest Dark! Harry fic I have ever read and there are some good ones on here. I hope Bella is okay and I'm wondering what Voldemort and Harrison have put Krum up to. By the way where were the females of Harrison's pack? Also I'm glad that he cut it off with Susan and I can see why he no longer wanted a relationship with a girl who feigned innocence, in fact I'm willing to bet that the times that Harrison mentioned where she was not shy about their relationship were all when Daphne was in the same room or in the immediate area. This is a great fic, keep up the great writing!
The Black Shadowx chapter 24 . 1/6
Firstly i do want to say that this is an absoutely brilliantly written piece of workand im glad to have read it.
Secondly i was wondering if sirius is 1) going to come face to face with harry /harrison. And 2) is his death going to follow cannon?
Cant wait to see how the story progresses.
goddragonking chapter 24 . 1/6
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
Albionia chapter 24 . 1/6
Great chapter really good, loved it. Happy New Year too ;) :).
Sebine chapter 1 . 1/6
"Voldemort never killed Harry, instead he killed his parents"

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