|Reviews for In the Dark|
| StrikerXE chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
With 'Through Her Burning Gaze' you gave a nice perspective of the events coming from the eyes of FP, and while Finn had a lot of camera time, it's good to catch on a little of what was going through his mind during this: from her with the flowers, his feelings through the battle and reunion, to the sad moment when they had to separate due to nature being a worse jerk than Magic Man, not that Jake was far behind after making SUCH a not funny joke while Finn was digesting it all, seriously, that was a little mean XP!
Glad the rain gave him an excuse to take a more inmediate course of action towards this, though I can't say I'm exactly TRILLED, I would be as worried as Finn if that happened, and fortunately he find her quickly, Grod know how much time she had left, but I guess the way she felt after he came for her must've helped a little to rekindle her a bit, just enough :D, and of course, just being there for the other, was really amazing, and the kiss, hands down, it was perfectly executed :D! The song is really fitting for this situation, I must say, hurt never felt that good, hehe, it was really something, awesome job here SCIK!
| DarkCzar13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Awesome Songfic! This is going on my favorites!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Did FP shed a tear on the original episode?
| Tmc chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
That was inspiring
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
| DP-shrine-in-closet-girl chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This is awesome! I think I'll read some of your other AT fics. Sometimes its hard to find a good one, but yours all sound really interesting.
| somerandomloser12231321 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Perfect sorta alternate ending for Hot To The Touch. I've noticed that Finn get's mushy and poetic when it comes to his crushes, and you did a very good job of showing that.