Reviewing from. Ch 1-2, I hope you one day come back to this and fix Sasuke. Sasuke sucks.

And your Vash needs some work.

Okay, I forgive every single shit for this Omake ending. As a side note. How dumb is Kirei? Everybody knows that the only way to kill a sequel is by giving everybody a happy ending and revealing every single secret to the different parties. He only had to reveal everything and make sure that none of the nice guys died, and the BOOM! No sequel!

LOVED IT!

Kayneth...those "people who died" were the only friends Shinji had in his entire life!
Anyway. TIM. I know you aren't proud of writing this and Stay Away. Heck compared to your new works, they aren't that great, I mean I started with Amazing Fantasy. that said Zero Sense and Stay Away are decent. And while many fics that you inspired were just copying parts of your own and claming it as their own, and most of them didn't get past the second chapter. But just as many of them were great and fantastic. I just wanted you to know that.
Recommend Zero Paradox. Especially since it's technically not inspired by you, but Zero Sanity, RWBY Zero, and Fate Fantasy. All of which are great. Especially the later two.
6/10. Would still recommend.

My only complaint with this story is Deadpool would have killed Zouken and Ryuunosuke because no matter how much he’s just a gag character he hates people that hurt kids

Aw, I'm looking forward to Deadpool.

Alright, listen fellow random guest(Who i'm quite sure keeps spamming his comments), if you don't know TMI views Fate: Zero Sense and Stay Away as Old Shame(Somewhat justifiably) and has written stories far better than these, if you're so petty that you feel you have to attack TMI on a story he no longer cares about and a story that despite it's flaw is decent and has inspired MILIONS! MILIONS! to write their own take on the premise, some of which are some of the best on the site, that alone shows he has genuine talents when it comes to storytelling. So if you don't get the drift, so please, if you've written you're own story that has half of the impact as this.

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I'm surprised sola didn't do this in canon after getting her way.

Author, gonna give it to you straight, your story is lolrandom nonsense stapled onto the original. This kind of thing is amusing for a few chapters before the joke outlives its welcome. And you're almost there.

So the whole lot just ran away because the time allotted to this chapter was over? After each one of them talking big on how they were gonna kick ass and defeat literally everyone? What a lame rehash of the original scene (no, adding your Caster to this little larp session doesn't make it any better, author).

I dislike that your story is silly nonsense. I like that your story is nothing but dumbfuckery. It's weird.

Why do they all have "spiky hair"? Is this a FZ fanfiction or an anime haircuts convention? Couldn't you think of any characters with proper hair, this story is getting unbearably unrealistic.

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GOODBYE KIREI