|Reviews for Meloetta's Tummy Ache|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Even now, the evil seed of what you have done germinates within you...
| deathrage chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
wow that's the end of the world. I wish I were there to see it
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
What the fuck did I just read?
| Barb chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
That was... the worst story I'v ever read... well... except for every one I've read where the ending is the same- the world blowing up and killing everyone except those at the epicenter. Those type of stories are always terrible...
| MaBoySquawks chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
| Umadbro chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Lol very epic end!
| Goldstein-Izayoi chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I wouldn't expect eating a cheeseburger whole would turn someone into a nasty explosive, so nasty it blows up the Earth! *puts Meloetta's face in a Danbo-chan style papercraft, then speaks to it* Ain't I wrong, Melo?
| Random Dawn 14 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
I thought my little bro had bad gas some days! X'D
So, is this finished? It doesn't say complete...
| FranceletteThe Mage-Lette chapter 1 . 6/21/2012