Reviews for Sweet Dreams
Thynerdgurl chapter 11 . 8/27/2012
Thynerdgurl chapter 9 . 8/27/2012
I'm just waiting for the newest chapter :3
bookwxrm chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
This is great, since we can finally see your point. But there's still "I ask confused by her" which should be "I ask, confused by her" and we need more information of what the character finds it confusing of. Watch out for incorrect punctuation!
922cf chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
This is really good! I love Fray and Alice together!
LucidChocolate chapter 3 . 7/24/2012
Yay! I'm glad you broke he dialogue up into paragraphs, it's a lot easier to read!
LucidChocolate chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
I'm glad they're all alive, I wish the Hunger Games had really been like this.
LucidChocolate chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Her "death" scene was sad, it sucks that the person she fell in love with died. I am really curious as to what's going on, and how/why she's still alive. I wonder if anyone else is still alive...
bookwxrm chapter 1 . 7/8/2012

Considering you got a beta to do your stories, it's quite good! Sometime you don't get your point across, but you should have some other beta (like me) :) do your stories or darkkitty again. Good story, rlb! :D

Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
I luv stories like these... They keep u wondering
Thynerdgurl chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
Love this story! Please keep going!
922cf chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
This is good, but make sure you put in paragraphs or something. With it all bunched up like in Chapter Two t was kinda hard to read.
jmint945 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Good start but watch out for little errors. I hope that was just a start. I hope you write more cause I want to know what happens to Alice.
IWriteStuffWithWordsInIt chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
:-o Those Gamemakers need to update their trackers to check for pulses...
keepyourchinup chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
im interested in seeing what happens next, please continue!
The Writing Fedora chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Oooh. Wat happens next?