Reviews for That First Love
Mrs. Ace Merrill chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Awesome intro!:D
Duck chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
These stories are really tragic and sad, but I still like them. They're creative, and they nearly bring tears to my eyes.
celestialstarynight chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
wow that is harsh, at least he has Gordie!

celestialstarynight chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
oh poor gordie... who would give up writing? thats like giving up breathing!

celestialstarynight chapter 3 . 6/26/2012
awww poor me, at lest i was loved :)

celestialstarynight chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
poor vern, no one likes him hahaha

mrschambers1986 chapter 6 . 6/21/2012
Love the epilogue
IAPhoenix2015 chapter 5 . 6/21/2012
ahhhhh! OMG you have succeeded my friend. You have succeeded in making me cry! I am tearing up right now. This is the best chapter. Oh gosh, poor girl and poor Chris. I loved it.
IAPhoenix2015 chapter 4 . 6/21/2012
awww *sniffle sniffle* how sad. yeah that was a pretty good idea to make her disinterested. The ending just sounded a little odd, with you saying the finding someone supportive thing. Otherwise it was good
IAPhoenix2015 chapter 3 . 6/21/2012
ok so since you wanted specifics, well for this chapter I'd say it was good. It was a lot more serious than Chapter 1 which is good because well haha Chapter 1 was Vern. and we all know how vern is. I really liked this Chapter though cuz the girl just kinda disappears.
IAPhoenix2015 chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
Hey buddy. Lol it's amusing cuz Vern's just so... Vern. I can't wait for the next chapter. Will it be Gordie? Or Teddy? Or will it be my personal fave of course, the oh-so-amazing Chris?