Reviews for Shakespeare In notso Love
Oro-shadow1 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Can-t-t b-b-rea-th. AHHHHH! Totally hilarious!
bookluv22 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Hilarious! Loved it.
MewHanyou chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I agree that his stories are good, but I agree with Sakura about the females in his story
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
I really enjoyed this!
Metautske chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
I loved it, and I like how you manage to make a one-shot that has so much depth and have it be only dialogue... Extremely jealous is what I am . But you do an amazing job, and I like your style of bitchy Sakura, hah! May your bunnies breed like, well, bunnies, and inspiration for your stories continue to bubble over into a waterfall! (And I honestly can't belive that I just wrote that last part...)
Meta
TheWingsOfButterflies chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Haha well that was fun. I greatly enjoy Sakura destroying literature for sexist tendencies. Keep up the good work.
GallyandBlack chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
That was funny and great and a really just fun one-shot. Great job and keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
lmao, hilarious!
LEGNA chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I ADORE your stories, and i love how you portray sakura. Lol loved the story too, but i did not... Love the way sakura was portrayed here. I get what you were going for... But she was just... Aggresive and rude here... Like it seems like she was YELLING everything at everyone, like in your other shakespearean story? The one with the auditions? I love that one and you can see how amd why the guys are taken by her. Here it just makes you wonder, because even though guys DO love strong and independent women, they stray from the girls that are overly aggresive and just yell and complain. Throughout the entire story, sakura is treating them all as if they just did something REALLY annoying and dumb, lol maybe they did but still. And she is cursing a lot more lately, i loved it when she just gave them witty comebacks. Idk, i wasnt a fan of the cursing an yelling, almost " whining"...Butbutbut but BUT i loved the akatsuki, and your itachi on this one. And i think your writing us brilliant, it makes me laugh, and its sorta romantic but never cheesy. keep it up! Waiting to read mora amazing stuff!
Katara-Hatake chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Lolx :D

I sooooooooooooo agree with her on this! although I love all of Shakepserae's plays!

K-H
xLL-Ax chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Wow, I liked it Good story D
AnimaAmore chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
ahaha, that was hilarious! And your writing is amazing, I simply adore and admire how with just dialogue everything was in perfect place - you could always tell who was speaking, and the tone of voice, adn everything! I must say, as well, that Sakura's littleside comments on what the guys were doing to her (or NEAR her) were quite amusing as well.

And that ending? Darling, it was prioceless!

All's good! I love your work!
hushnelle chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
The last part gold. It just happened to fit so wonderfully.
I do like Shakespeare, but honestly, I hated reading Romeo and Juliet. I can't relate with any characters and I honestly don't find anything romantic about suicide. Even if it's because they man you love is dead. -.-
For just dialogue, everything was kept amusing and all of their characters were portrayed vividly! I especially love Sakura's tough attitude!
VesperChan chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
I laughed so hard, especially when Sakura reacted to things the guys were doing. I think the lack of tags in conversation made it so much fun and easy to read, cause it just flowed from one person's mouth to the other. it was sort of like controlled chaos, with crack...and Sakura...and hot guys. :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I really liked this! Even if it was a little difficult to find the differences between Itachi and Pein, thats ok! The entire idea made up for it, and I was laughing so hard my sides hurt the entire time. Sakura does seem like she would be a very passionate feminist, considering she grew up in the shadow of her teammates. I adored her attitude, and thought the ending was amazing. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more amazing AkaSaku from you!
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