Reviews for Touhou Shinryaku : Gensokyo Invaders
Guest chapter 17 . 10/12/2013
did you not listen to a single thing that stevo and spaztique said in their riff of this?
Feng Lengshun chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
Go search "Lost in Gensokyo" on YouTube. Congratulations.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
shity story bro
Guest chapter 13 . 8/18/2012
THE ENGRISH!
IT BURNS!
Just a TouhouFan chapter 5 . 8/18/2012
Please the next time when you write about Touhou...
GET THE FACTS! It's not like you could just go on the Touhou Wiki to look up your stuff, wait...you can!
Don't make the characters act and look like you want! Make the like they are!
Mercenary Flyer chapter 6 . 7/26/2012
This does need work. Especially the massive wall of text syndrome that you have going on. Jesus man, no one likes to read a story set up like that.
Stevo's Stuff chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
Google "The Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test" and take it for Ryo. That is all.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
Hello! I just wanna pop in here to the review section to say that I have indeed been reading this and I have indeed been enjoying it! However, as you have said, you're English isn't what I'd call perfect, so it would definitely help if you were to get somebody to help edit it. I would be glad to help you myself. Other than that, the only other bit of advice I have for you that isn't related to spelling or grammar is purely aesthetic, in that some of your paragraphs look more like walls of text, so a couple more separations would most definitely not hurt.

Bair
UltraZeta120moron chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
have to say i really enjoyed reading this :D keep up the good work