Reviews for Fragments of Innocence
Haematic chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Loved it! It was sad, but liked how it ended. :) This one-shot was really good and the length was perfect. It flowed nicely. Asbel will always help Richard, haha.
Kyu-Momo chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Aww man I feel so bad for both of them. Great job! :)
K. B. Piper chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This was absolutely amazing and tear inducing.
Nie chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Ooohh, nice fic! Very well written and both of them were completely in-character. And the "stay alive" quote reminds me of Symphonia. x3 Kratos is the only Tales char I love as much as Richard!
Pororing chapter 1 . 6/29/2012 a very cool story! *no pun intended*

Everyone just seems to be in-character. Especially Asbel, of course he'd be that determined to figure out what's wrong with Richard now, would he? This could definately fit in as a scene in the game.

I dunno if it's intentional, but I thought the setting complimented the overall mood of the story too. But then this IS Fendel's weather we're talking about... x3

A beautifully written fanfic. I definately loved reading this.
KoshKing777 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Cool! I like this a lot - the dialogue seemed quite genuine and moving. I think it would have fit perfectly in the game, and would have given the plot some much-needed forward motion. Nice job. :)