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A fan chapter 23 . 2/2
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This was absolutely beautiful. Really, one of the best fics I've ever read
A fan chapter 21 . 2/2
Oh my god you have me crying!
storyandstories chapter 17 . 3/17/2016
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kitiku01 chapter 23 . 2/3/2016
Love the story and the happy ending! Just sad that I was able to read it now, but better late than never. Wonderful talent
Agnes chapter 23 . 7/21/2015
Hi! I know you put this up ages ago... but I want you to know (even though Ive read so many times since I found it) that this is such a beautiful fairytale... you give the characters real feeling and power of love... You make them desirable (?) and believable and brave and also very emotional.
Ive read many fics, but still, this is the one I cling most to... I love it... the whole story... I love the uncondional love between them, and how intertwined they are with each other.. your words are just... fantastic... and I believe this is my favorite fiction of those two... Harry and Draco are my life, they are my everything and to read such a story as this is amazing... you mesmerized me with your words and I get caught up in those two characters, living in my mind.
You have a wonderful aspect of their unbreakable love. I love everything in this story...
So thanks, for sharing it... and embracing it to all of us. This is so fantastic I am loss at words.
And I always thinks of this particular story... when I listen to Muse- Sunburn :)
Thanks for such a beautiful story with a conflicted Harry and Draco, and as loving as they are... and loving each other.
Thanks
/Agnes from Sweden.
hotcat chapter 23 . 4/16/2014
love it. thanks for sharing
hana chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
wow! what a wonderful story. i nearly dismiss it at the beginning because of the format.
(it stick close togerther, and hard to read),

but i was so curious how this story goes and love draco too much to miss a single story of him :)

i am glad, i read it all till the end.
i love draco character, his weaknest, his strenght, his friendship. especially booboo... i think he handle harry the right way after the cheat. i hope they live hapilly ever after. and sequal. please.

thank you for sharing
xxx
hana chapter 16 . 4/1/2014
love booboo... love baby draco
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 20 . 3/6/2013
It is so hard to read this. It's all just crammed together so it makes it harder to read. Try spacing your paragraphs, don't make them so large. And my god, boo boo? what the hell kind of name is that for anything.
Rennasakura chapter 23 . 6/9/2012
Mhmm, I think I love part 2 better than part 1 simply because of the angst. I love the type of angst you're writing in this story, it make me cry you know :D

What I love even more is how Draco doesn't automatically jump to Harry arm when he apologize to him (many other fics does that and it felt wrong reading it) and make Harry hurt as much as possible (well, same result with Draco but that just make the angst better)

love much, wonderful story
macgruberrr chapter 23 . 6/9/2012
wow. I liked this, liked it a lot, though at some points I was extremely confused- it seemed as though parts were missin from the story? or that may have been your intention...buy either way, I did enjoy the depth of feeling between H&D, and I also liked how Crabbe&Goyle, while not terribly intelligent, still cared deeply for Draco. and lastly, I WANT A BOOBOO3 ohhh he was so cute!
Keladrion chapter 19 . 5/12/2012
Hi.

So the thing is, I read this a very very long time ago and I loved this speech:

And then Crabbe spoke. "You miss him."

Silence, and light breathing from Goyle, who sat slightly forward in his seat, turning back to look at Crabbe with an unreadable look.

"You do," Crabbe continued, voice even, tone steady, carefully blank. "I can hear it in your sighs; I can see it in your smiles. Your tears speak most loudly of all, and they tell me stories of pain and despair. You call me a poet – an artist – and as both, I see the colours of your love for him, brighter than the sun that we hide from, and all encompassing, like the night sky. It is feeding on you in ugly shades of hurt and betrayal, and you are diminishing – much as one would burn when they try to hide the sun deep within themselves. You cannot contain it within, and it will not be contained, for your feelings towards him are too strong for even your will of iron and nerves of steel."

Draco had sat up slowly during Crabbe's short speech, eyes wide.

"I know he loves you still. I can see it in his eyes; I can read it in his glances. His cries echo in your heart, and they scream to you of love and longing. His love could destroy existence as we know it with one word from you. Could you not see how his heart is bleeding great rivers; he is drowning in their merciless waves. He is the ocean, ever giving to you only, and you are the desert, only desiring from him ever." Thus ended Crabbe's monologue.

And for some reason I copied it onto a word doc and then promptly forgot about it. Last year sometime I was going though my stuff and I found it and then somehow found myself turning it into a poem and because it's not like it was something that was entirely mine (it really isn't at all) so I wanted to go and ask you if it was okay with you because I put my stuff on the internet but I couldn't, for the life of me, remember what fic it was from. So now I've come across this fic again and I read the first bit with Vince and Greg talking bout Dray and just KNEW that this was the fic so I went to find this chapter to ask. I then realised that I have also already put the poem up somewhere.

Here: s/3004719/1/The_Ocean_and_the_Desert

I mean, as you can see it's basically exactly what you wrote just in lines and verses.

SO what I'm basically trying to say is that I made the speech into a poem because I liked it so much, it's truly beautiful, and I was wandering if that's okay. If it's not I'll just take it down. If you like I can put an A/N explaining where I got it from because, to be honest, I really feel like it's stolen. Sorry If I rambled a bit in this.

Josi
Guest chapter 3 . 2/25/2012
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b3yondimaginations chapter 23 . 10/6/2011
I like your story! it sets me thinking and wondering what is going on, although at first it's quite confusing. oh i just have to say this,i hate this harry here,no offense.:) he's just so so so so extremely selfish!

if he really loves draco,he would have kept on trying to be there for him even when he's pushed away. draco's been suffering more than him and he doesn't even DO anything about it! he doesn't pursue what help and support he can give, or even just be there in silence for him. all he wants is what draco can give him. he doesn't think abt what draco needs. he even ask draco to let him touch him even if draco doesn't love him, like wth! yeh obsession,too much. harry just have his selfish desires and doesn't even want/let draco have his needed time away from him. and he cheated on him! and dares to insist draco to forgive him for his one "tiny mistake" and gets angry and blames him! he has no right to get angry with draco, from my oppinion. and even dares to even think about slapping him! but at least at the last part, he kind of changes a bit for the better, realising his mistake. harry only fights harder when he realised that he's losing draco. why didn't he fight for draco that hard b4 he had the affair? anw, i like draco here. poor thing.

sorry for a long rambling and harry bashing here if u really read this. :X but overall, well done!
ElGal chapter 23 . 8/19/2011
Oh my GOD that was amazing! I cried and blubbered so much during that that I think I would have managed to flood the Sahara. I've read so so so so many fics on this site, 500 at the very least, and this is my favourite out of all the ones I've read. It's is pure beauty and everything a story should be. Amazing, wonderful and unbelievable job, please keep up the good work!

E.G
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